Question

【題目】假如英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌的以下作文，文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加，刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

I am used to be a naughty boy, who always made my parents annoyed from time to time. One day, as I was wandering around the field near my house, a cricket attracts my attention and I couldn’t help catch it. I was noticed doing all this by Nick, a friend of mine, and he said to me, “Let’s put the cricket on Selina’s desk to frighten her, all right?”O(jiān)f course I said yes, and I, together with him, were going to do just as what we had discussed. A few minutes before our trick, Selina saw it and was so frightened that she fell off the chair and broke his head. Afterwards, criticizing by my parents, I was made apologize to her. This lesson taught me a lot, warning me not to play a trick at other people. Since then, I have done things much well than before and become a man with manners and dignity.

Answer 1

【答案】1. 去掉am

2. attracts→attracted

3. catch→catching

4. were→was

5. before→after

6. his→her

7. criticizing→criticized

8. made 和apologize 中間加to

9. at→on

10. well→better

【解析】本文主要講了作者小時(shí)候很淘氣，在一次捉弄?jiǎng)e人受到了父母的嚴(yán)厲批評(píng)之后，作者逐漸成為了一個(gè)有禮貌和有尊嚴(yán)的人。

1. 考查動(dòng)詞。句意：我以前是個(gè)淘氣的男孩，總是一次次讓我父母煩惱。固定短語(yǔ)：used to do sth.（過(guò)去常常），而be used to do sth.（被用于做……），根據(jù)后文可知，作者在經(jīng)過(guò)一件事情之后變好，所以是過(guò)去常常惹父母生氣，故去掉am。

2. 考查時(shí)態(tài)。此處attract是謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，本句說(shuō)的是過(guò)去的事情，要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，故把attracts改為attracted。

3. 考查動(dòng)名詞。固定短語(yǔ)：can’t help doing sth.（忍不住做某事），故把catch改為catching。

4. 考查主謂一致。當(dāng)兩個(gè)主語(yǔ)由together with連接時(shí)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞要跟前面的那個(gè)主語(yǔ)一致，即，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞要與I一致，所以要用was，故把were改為was。

5. 考查介詞。句意：就在我們耍了這個(gè)詭計(jì)幾分鐘之后，Selina就看到了。根據(jù)語(yǔ)境，應(yīng)該是“之后”，故把before改為after。

6. 考查代詞。此處是說(shuō)Selina摔倒了，并且打破了她的頭。Selina是女孩，所以要用代詞her，故把his改為her。

7. 考查過(guò)去分詞。句意：此后，受到了父母的批評(píng)，我被迫向她道歉。與主語(yǔ)I是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，故此處應(yīng)該用過(guò)去分詞criticized作狀語(yǔ)，故把criticizing改為criticized。

8. 考查不定式。make sb. do sth.當(dāng)用于被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)時(shí)要加上不定式符號(hào)to，故把made 和apologize 中間加to。

9. 考查介詞。固定短語(yǔ)：play a trick on sb（捉弄某人），故把at改為on。

10. 考查副詞。句意：從那以后，我做得比以前好多了。根據(jù)than before可知，與以前作比較，所以副詞well要用比較級(jí)，故把well改為better。