Question

你叫林濤，是一名中學(xué)生，你對(duì)部分同學(xué)迷于玩電子游戲(video games)的現(xiàn)象很著急，便向一家英文報(bào)社編輯部寄了一封信，闡述了玩電子游戲的壞處。
要點(diǎn)如下：
1．電子游戲在學(xué)生中很流行，有些學(xué)生整天玩電子游戲，忘了做作業(yè)，甚至逃學(xué)（play truant）。
2．玩電子游戲要花很多錢(qián)，有的經(jīng)常向父母要錢(qián)，有的經(jīng)常向同學(xué)借錢(qián)，有的甚至偷同學(xué)的錢(qián)。
3．過(guò)分玩電子游戲使店主受益，對(duì)同學(xué)的學(xué)習(xí)和健康不利。
4．希望政府采取措施加以制止。
注意：1．詞數(shù)120左右 2．全文包括以上內(nèi)容，但不要逐字翻譯 3．信的開(kāi)頭已給出。
Dear editor,
Now video games are very popular among the school students. _____________________

Answer 1

Dear editor,
Now video games are very popular among the school students. Some students are so interested in the game that they spend all day playing. Sometimes they forget to do their homework and some even play truant. Each time they have to pay much money. In order to play video games they often ask their parents for more money, some often borrow money from other students, some even steal money from their classmates, which have brought out every bad effects.
Too much video game playing needs time, money and energy. The owners benefit a lot but it’s not good for the students’ study and health.
I do hope measures will be taken by the government to prevent students from playing video games.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文。你叫林濤，是一名中學(xué)生，你對(duì)部分同學(xué)迷于玩電子游戲(video games)的現(xiàn)象很著急，便向一家英文報(bào)社編輯部寄了一封信，闡述了玩電子游戲的壞處。要點(diǎn)如下：1．電子游戲在學(xué)生中很流行，有些學(xué)生整天玩電子游戲，忘了做作業(yè)，甚至逃學(xué)（play truant）。2．玩電子游戲要花很多錢(qián)，有的經(jīng)常向父母要錢(qián)，有的經(jīng)常向同學(xué)借錢(qián)，有的甚至偷同學(xué)的錢(qián)。3．過(guò)分玩電子游戲使店主受益，對(duì)同學(xué)的學(xué)習(xí)和健康不利。4．希望政府采取措施加以制止。需要寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當(dāng)添加些內(nèi)容，使文章更充實(shí)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。一定要給出自己的看法。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型為文章潤(rùn)色。注意要求的詞數(shù)120詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】In order to play video games they often ask their parents for more money, some often borrow money from other students, some even steal money from their classmates, which have brought out every bad effects. 這里含有一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。