Question

【題目】在英語課堂上，老師要求同學們根據(jù)下面的兩幅圖畫輪流發(fā)言。請準備一篇發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容包括：

1.描述圖畫的內(nèi)容；

2.揭示圖畫所反映的主題；

3.針對圖畫的內(nèi)容談談你的看法。

注意：詞數(shù)100左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】As is shown in the first picture, some white doves are flying over some green trees, while in the next picture they turn gray when they are flying over some chimneys because the trees have been cut down. The pictures warn us of a fact that air pollution is getting serious in some places. In recent years, with the development of science and technology, more and more factories have been built, which give off waste gases that pollute the environment. It is time that we took effective measures to fight air pollution. We should not achieve economic development at the expense of the environment. What is more important to us is a blue sky and a green environment.

【解析】首先審題，這是一篇看圖寫話類作文。首先觀察圖畫內(nèi)容，第一幅圖畫白色小鳥在綠樹成蔭中快樂的飛翔，第二幅圖畫小鳥經(jīng)過空氣被污染區(qū)域羽毛被染成了黑色，由此我們會想到時下的熱點話題空氣污染和環(huán)保。接下來，繼續(xù)審題，請準備一篇發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.描述圖畫的內(nèi)容；2.揭示圖畫所反映的主題；3.針對圖畫的內(nèi)容談談你的看法�？紤]用一般現(xiàn)在時，第三人稱來寫。文章可分三個層次來寫：其一描述圖畫的內(nèi)容；其二深層次剖析圖畫想要表達的主題；其三說明自己的看法。這篇文章對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

【亮點說明】本篇書面表達要點全面，結構緊湊，是一篇較好的范文。這篇短文使用了復合句。例如：使用了同位語從句The pictures warn us of a fact that air pollution is getting serious in some places.和定語從句In recent years, with the development of science and technology, more and more factories have been built, which give off waste gases that pollute the environment..