【題目】最近，我校就同學(xué)們的習(xí)慣養(yǎng)成問(wèn)題展開(kāi)了討論。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提示的信息，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇題為A good habit, a successful life 的短文，發(fā)表在學(xué)校的網(wǎng)站上。

良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣

1.上課注意力集中；2.充分利用自習(xí)時(shí)間；3.獨(dú)立完成作業(yè)。

良好的生活習(xí)慣

1.健康飲食；2.正常鍛煉；3.充足睡眠。

養(yǎng)成良好的習(xí)慣的好處

（考生結(jié)合自身感受補(bǔ)充兩點(diǎn)）

注意：1.對(duì)所有要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯；

2.詞數(shù)120左右。開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

3.作文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等；

4.參考詞匯：自習(xí) independent study。

A good habit, a successful life

A habit is something that you do often or regularly almost without thinking, especially something that is hard to stop doing.

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【答案】A good habit, a successful life

A habit is something that you do often or regularly almost without thinking, especially something that is hard to stop doing.

Developing good habits of learning is necessary for us. First of all, we should concentrate our attention in class, which will help us better understand what teachers say. Also, we are supposed to make the best of the time for independent study, which can improve our ability to learn by ourselves. Finally, we are encouraged to finish homework alone.

At the same time, good habits of living are also good for our life. Healthy eating along with regular exercise is probably the only way to become fit. What is more, a good amount of sleep every night is also important for our health, for it makes us feel energetic and well prepared for the day to come.

Good habits have a positive effect on our life. Once a good habit is formed, it will give us power to control ourselves and get rid of bad habits. If we insist on behaving ourselves properly, we are sure to live a successful life.

【解析】試題分析：本文要求以A good habit, a successful life為題寫(xiě)一篇短文談?wù)勱P(guān)于習(xí)慣養(yǎng)成的問(wèn)題。根據(jù)提示可知文章需要包括三個(gè)方面信息，一是良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣；二是良好的生活習(xí)慣；三是良好習(xí)慣給人帶來(lái)的好處。在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)安排上可以用三個(gè)段落來(lái)分別介紹這些內(nèi)容。由于每個(gè)方面還有很多細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，所以在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞或者過(guò)渡詞以使段落層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，比如firstly、secondly、besides、on the one hand 、on the other hand 等。在語(yǔ)言的組織上要注意使用多種句式結(jié)構(gòu)，以及長(zhǎng)短句的交替使用，這樣可以形成文章的亮點(diǎn)。此外，根據(jù)文章內(nèi)容可以使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)段落清晰，層次分明，語(yǔ)言通順流暢。在介紹各方面習(xí)慣時(shí)用到了表示層次關(guān)系和遞進(jìn)關(guān)系的連接詞，比如Also，finally；at the same time ，what is more等，這樣有效地使段落更具有層次感，而不會(huì)給人雜亂無(wú)章的感覺(jué)。在句式方面作者使用了并列句、for it makes us feel energetic and well prepared for the day to come.狀語(yǔ)從句Once a good habit is formed, If we insist on behaving ourselves properly等，給樸素的語(yǔ)言增加了幾分色彩。同時(shí)作者在文中使用了很多高級(jí)詞匯和短語(yǔ)，比如concentrate on , behave oneself , get rid of 等，這些也顯示了作者較高的語(yǔ)言水平。

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