Question

【題目】假定你是李華，高考來(lái)臨之際，你寫信給美國(guó)的也即將高中畢業(yè)并面臨考試壓力的筆友John。要點(diǎn)如下：

1.表達(dá)問候和理解；

2.憧憬大學(xué)生活；

3.考前鼓勵(lì)。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear John,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dcar John,

How are you lately? With graduation drawing near, you are undoubtedly under massive stress. At this critical moment, I just want to let you know you are not alone.

When you are really mentally and physically exhausted, picture the wonderful university life ahead of you. In class, we will be sitting in a huge fully-packed hall, enjoying the pleasure of being enlightened by world-class professors. After class, a large amount of time will be at our disposal.

Difficulties will in time pass away, and all we need to do is hold fast to our dreams and trust ourselves. Best wishes.

Yours

Liu Hua

【解析】

這是一篇提綱類寫作。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，假定你是李華，高考來(lái)臨之際，你寫信給美國(guó)的也即將高中畢業(yè)并面臨考試壓力的筆友John。要點(diǎn)如下：1.表達(dá)問候和理解；2.憧憬大學(xué)生活；3.考前鼓勵(lì)。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組）：graduation (畢業(yè))；undoubtedly (毫無(wú)疑問)；under massive stress (在巨大的壓力下)；critical(決定性的)；mentally and physically (心理和生理)等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。此處文章主要應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。