Question

【題目】假如你是李華。某英文報社正在舉行主題未“周日關(guān)閉智能手機”的活動，你很感興趣。請你用英文給此報社發(fā)一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 表明愿意參加活動，并給出原因；

2. 關(guān)閉手機后，你準備在本周日安排哪些活動；

3. 表示會向同學們介紹此項活動。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100--120；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am pleased to learn about your appeal to spend a Sunday without using smartphones.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam:

I am pleased to learn about your appeal to spend a Sunday without using smartphones. I’m very glad to join in the activity. Smartphones are playing an important role nowadays, making it easier for us to communicate with others and deal with work. But at the same time, we seem to be losing the skills of the face-to-face communication.

I will present my plans for this Sunday here. After getting up, I would like to invite my friends to go for a morning run in the park. At noon, it is a good idea to help my parents prepare a big meal, after which my family will spend the whole afternoon enjoying the latest movie together. In the evening, we will stay at home, reading books.

It is really a meaningful activity, so I am eager to recommend it to my classmates.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給英文報社發(fā)一封電子郵件。

第一步: 審題

體裁: 應(yīng)用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

結(jié)構(gòu): 總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：

1. 表明愿意參加活動，并給出原因；

2. 關(guān)閉手機后，你準備在本周日安排哪些活動；

3. 表示會向同學們介紹此項活動。

第二步: 列提綱 (重點詞組)

be pleased to；appeal to；be glad to；join in；communicate with；look forward to

第三步: 連詞成句

I am pleased to learn about your appeal to spend a Sunday without using smartphones.

Smartphones are playing an important role nowadays, making it easier for us to communicate with others and deal with work.

But at the same time, we seem to be losing the skills of the face-to-face communication.

After getting up, I would like to invite my friends to go for a morning run in the park.

At noon, it is a good idea to help my parents prepare a big meal, after which my family will spend the whole afternoon enjoying the latest movie together.

In the evening, we will stay at home, reading books.

It is really a meaningful activity, so I am eager to recommend it to my classmates.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步: 連句成篇 (銜接詞)

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second，And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing, On the one hand, On the other hand, while, as for

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步: 潤色修改