Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的美國筆友John得知武漢因?yàn)樾鹿诓《疽�起的肺炎封城，學(xué)校不能如期開學(xué)，想知道你們現(xiàn)在在家如何學(xué)習(xí)。請你寫一封回信。內(nèi)容包括：

1.學(xué)習(xí)內(nèi)容和方式；

2.鍛煉方式；

3.感想。

參考詞匯：the novel coronavirus新型冠狀病毒；pneumonia肺炎 lockdown n.封城；quarantine v.隔離

要求：1.詞數(shù)100左右:

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear John,

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Yours,

LiHua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear John,

Thank you for caring. As we all know, Wuhan is the most dangerous city, because Wuhan has the largest number of people suffering from the novel coronavirus, and the whole city has been closed by lockdown. However, I am well in spite of feeling scared at times.

Although I do not know when the school begins, I have started my lessons organized by our teachers through the Internet, including all the curricula. It is so wonderful that I am fond of the new style. Besides, I keep the balance both mentally and physically, such as playing badminton, playing chess , dancing with my grandmother .

We are quarantining ourselves at home now, but the cold winter is about to pass, and spring will come as promised .When the spring flowers bloom, we can go to the streets without masks ,with flowers .Come on, Wuhan! Come on, China!

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

這是一篇應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封信。

第一步：審題。審題的目的是獲取重要信息。通過審題我們可以確定幾個(gè)方面的信息。第一，你的美國筆友John得知武漢因?yàn)樾鹿诓《疽�起的肺炎封城，學(xué)校不能如期開學(xué)，想知道你們現(xiàn)在在家如何學(xué)習(xí)。請你寫一封回信。內(nèi)容包括: 1.學(xué)習(xí)內(nèi)容和方式；2.鍛煉方式； 3.感想。第二，人稱為第一人稱和第三人稱。第三，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

第二步：布局段落，確定主要段落，次要段落，段落數(shù)量。這篇寫作段落數(shù)量為三段。第一段，表示感謝，并說明自己的狀況。第二段，學(xué)習(xí)內(nèi)容和方式；鍛煉方式；第三段，感想。

第三步：確定關(guān)鍵詞匯和短語: bloom, curricula, suffering from, lockdown, in spite of ,both mentally and physically, quarantine ourselves, be about to do .

第四步：確定較為高級的句子: although 引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句Although I do not know when the school begins, I have started my lessons organized by our teachers through the internet, including all the curricula. 以及so...that 引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句It is so wonderful that I like the new style .

第五步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞進(jìn)行過渡銜接:However，Besides，Finally.

第六步：注意書寫，保持卷面整潔，避免劃線，亂擦。