Question

【題目】閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構成一個完整的故事。

A little boy selling magazines for school walked up to a house that people rarely visited. The house was very old and shabby and the owner hardly ever came out. When he did come out, he would not say hello to his neighbors or passers-by but simply just glare at them.

The boy knocked on the door and waited, sweating from fear of the old man. The boy’s parents told him to stay away from the house, and a lot of the other neighborhood children were told the same thing from their parents.

As he was ready to walk away, the door slowly opened. “What do you want?” the old man said impatiently. The little boy was very afraid but he had a quota(份額) to meet for school with selling the magazines. So he got up the courage and said, “Uh, sir, I am selling these magazines and uh, I was wondering if you would like to buy one from me.”

The old man just stared at the boy without a word. The boy could see inside the old man’s house and saw that he had dog figurines(小雕像) on the fireplace mantle. “Do you collect dogs?” The little boy asked. “Yes, I have many collections in my house. They are my family here and they are all I have.” The boy then felt sorry for the man, as it seemed that he was a very lonely soul.

“Well, I do have a magazine here for collectors. It is perfect for you. I also have one about dogs since you like dogs so much.” The old man was ready to close the door on the boy and said, “No, boy. I don’t need any magazines of any kind, now goodbye.”

The little boy was sad that he was not going to make his quota with the sale. He was also sad for the old man being so alone in the house that he owned. The boy went home and then had an idea. He had a little dog figurine that he got some years ago from an aunt. The figurine did not mean nearly as much to him since he had a real live dog and a large family.

注意：

1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應為150左右；

2. 應使用5個以上短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語；

3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；

4. 續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。

Paragraph 1:

The little boy headed back down to the old man’s house.

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Paragraph 2:

From that day on something changed inside the old man.

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Answer 1

【答案】The boy headed back down to the old man’s house. He knocked on the door again and this time the old man came right to the door. “Boy, I thought I told you no magazines!” The old man stared at him angrily. “I know that, sir. I just wanted to bring you a gift.” The little boy handed him the dog figurine. Looking at the boy, the old man was too surprised to say anything and simply smiled in tears, as no one had ever shown him so much kindness.

From that day on something changed inside the old man. He started coming out of the house and talking to his neighbors. Soon, he and the boy became friends. The boy visited the old man frequently and brought his real live dog to his house once in a while. He even invited the old man to join his family for Christmas dinner. With the boy’s company, the old man was no longer alonely soul.

【解析】

本篇考察的作文類型是讀后續(xù)寫。

前文主要講的是男孩去老人家里推銷雜志，發(fā)現(xiàn)老人家里有很多小狗的雕像，于是和老人交談中了解到老人喜歡收集狗，但是拒絕買男孩的雜志。于是男孩第二天準備將一個幾年前從一個阿姨那里得到的小狗雕像拿去送給老人。在給的第一段開頭中，“The little boy headed back down to the old man’s house.”“headed back”意思是“朝……走去”，第一段后文圍繞著老人的反應來展開；第二段開頭From that day on something changed inside the old man.中something changed是關鍵詞，后文主要圍繞著老人的變化而展開。

【高分句型一】

After he knocked on the door again, the old man came right to the door. 他又敲了敲門，這次老人正好來到門口。運用after引導時間狀語從句。

【高分句型二】

The boy visited the old man so frequently that he even invited the old man to join his family for Christmas dinner. 這個男孩經(jīng)常去看望老人，他甚至邀請老人和他的家人一起吃圣誕晚餐。運用so…that…引導結果狀語從句。