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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下短文。短文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Last weekend,after pay a visit to the city of New York,I visited the Smithsonian Institutions National Air and Space Museum,where lies in Washington,D.C.

The museum,which covers a area of 18,000 square meters,is made of 24 exhibition halls.All kinds of planes, rockets,missiles and spaceship of great importance and variously old instruments that famous pilots and astronauts used are on display.In addition,I see copies of some satellites and aircraft.More interestingly,I tried operating on some aircraft by myself.During the visit,I took lots of pictures as well.

This brief visit helped myself learn much about the history of human's space exploration.It made me more interesting in science and technology.

Answer 1

【答案】

【解析】 本文是一篇記敘文。講述了作者上周末的游玩經(jīng)歷，并著重介紹了Space Museum以及他在博物館中的所見所聞所感所獲。

After是介詞，后面可跟分詞短語，不能直接跟動(dòng)詞原形。故將pay改為paying。

“...and Space Museum,where lies in Washington,D.C.”逗號后面是非限制性定語從句，修飾前面的Space Museum，從句中缺主語，所以不能用地點(diǎn)狀語引導(dǎo)詞where。故將where改為which。

“The museum,which covers a area of 18,000 square meters”冠詞修飾名詞area，因?yàn)?/span>area是元音開頭的單詞，所以要用an。故將a改為an。

“is made of 24 exhibition halls.”此句考查be made up of...由...組成。故添加up。

“All kinds of planes, rockets,missiles and spaceship”句中四個(gè)名詞并列，前三個(gè)都是復(fù)數(shù)形式，spaceship是可數(shù)名詞，所以需加s。故將spaceship改為spaceships。

“of great importance and variously old instruments that...”句中of great importance=very important和variously所處的成分并列，修飾名詞old instruments ，需用形容詞，variously是用來修飾動(dòng)詞的副詞。故將variously改為various。

縱覽全文，是在講述作者上周末的經(jīng)歷，通篇都是過去時(shí)態(tài)，“I see copies of some satellites and aircraft.”中see作謂語，應(yīng)用過去式。故將see改為saw。

“I tried operating on some aircraft by myself.”operate是及物動(dòng)詞，后面直接跟名詞，不需加介詞。故將on去掉。

“This brief visit helped myself learn much about ...”help是動(dòng)詞，myself在此句中充當(dāng)賓語，需用賓格形式，而不能用物主代詞。雖然有help oneself這種用法，但意思是請自便，不符合句意。故將myself改為me。

“It made me more interesting in science and technology.”make sb interested in...使某人對...感興趣，interesting用來形容某物是有吸引力的。故將interesting改為interested。