Question

【題目】請仔細(xì)觀察下面的圖表，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

【寫作內(nèi)容】

1.用約30個單詞概述圖表中的現(xiàn)象；

2.造成這一現(xiàn)象的原因有哪些，簡要談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎㄔ�因不少于兩點）；

3.提出你對這一問題的解決方法。

【寫作要求】

1.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

2.不必寫標(biāo)題；

3.參考詞匯：obesity rate 肥胖率 malnutrition rate 營養(yǎng)不良率 school-age children 學(xué)齡兒童

【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】

內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

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Answer 1

【答案】The chart shows that family income greatly affects the health problems of school-age children. With the family income increasing, their malnutrition rate has been falling, while the obesity rate rising.

There are some reasons accounting for this phenomenon. On the one hand, parents with higher income spoil their children to such a degree that they tend to provide their children with delicious fatty food, but ignore the importance of their balanced diets. On the other hand, parents with lower income cannot afford expensive nutritious food due to their economic squeeze, which leads to their children’s malnutrition.

As for the solutions to this phenomenon, parents of high-income families should increase their awareness of the severe problem with obesity and help their children develop healthy eating habits. Meanwhile, parents of low-income families should and must try every means to improve the quality of their children’s diets, which help them grow healthily.

【解析】本文屬于圖表類作文，以第三人稱為主，時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時。

我們可以根據(jù)提示將這些信息進(jìn)行整理和安排，使文章的意思銜接更自然。文中所使用的詞匯和句型，是學(xué)生們比較熟悉的，所以將平時的積累發(fā)揮出來就可以。當(dāng)然我們要盡量使用一些好的句型和連詞，使文章上下文意思連貫，更出彩。短文中作者按照題目的要求條理清楚，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，要點全面。文章語言簡練，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，覆蓋所有要點。