【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改l0處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

One year ago, I had a special English lesson hold at the railway station. It was quite different from the regular English classes we were familiar to, for we had no textbooks, no blackboard and no fixed seats.

Gathered at the entrance of the station, we told to collect as much English words and sentence as possible there. Curious and excited, we walked around the station and looked everywhere, search for any information in English. Whenever an English word comes into sight, the class wouldburstinto the cheers as if we had discovered a new world. With the Chinese translation and vividly pictures, we could figure out its meaning with ease.

Now, this unforgettable lesson still encourages me to be an active learner where I go.

【1】【2】【3】【4】【5】

【6】【7】【8】【9】【10】

【答案】

【1】第一句hold 改為 held。

【2】第二句to 改為 with。

【3】第二句or 改為 and。

【4】第三句 told前加 were。

【5】第三句 here 改為 there。

【6】第四句 search 改為searching。

【7】第五句 comes 改為 came。

【8】第五句 cheers前去掉the。

【9】第六句 vividly改為vivid。

【10】第七句where改為wherever

【解析】1.考查過去分詞作后置定語。句意：一年前，我上了一節(jié)在火車站舉辦的特殊的英語課。這里用hold的過去分詞作后置定語，表示和English lesson的被動關(guān)系，故hold改為held。

2.考查介詞固定搭配。句意：它完全不同于我們所熟悉的常規(guī)英語課堂。be familiar with 一般是指某人熟悉某人、某物。be familiar to則是某物、某事為某人熟悉。故把to改為with。

3. 考查現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語。句意：我們聚集在火車站門口，被要求在那里收集盡可能多的英語單詞和句子。這里主從句主語一致，從句動詞用現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語，表示和主句主語we的主動關(guān)系。故Gathered改為Gathering。

4. 本句中English words and sentences是可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式，many用來修飾可數(shù)名詞，要用as many as possible表示“盡可能多的”，故much改為many。

5.考查可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)。sentence是可數(shù)名詞，和可數(shù)名詞English words并列，需用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故sentence—sentences。

6.考查非謂語動詞。句意：我們好奇又激動，在車站周圍走動，到處看，搜尋英語的信息。這里用現(xiàn)在分詞searching表示和主語we是主動關(guān)系，而且伴隨謂語動作walked around the station and looked everywhere，故search改為searching。

7. 考查時態(tài)。句意：一旦有英文單詞進(jìn)入我們的視野，班級里便會發(fā)出歡呼聲，好像我們發(fā)現(xiàn)了新大陸一樣。根據(jù)第一句的時間狀語One year ago，可知本文是在描述過去的事情，用一般過去時態(tài)，故comes改為came。

8.考查固定搭配。burst into cheers“爆發(fā)出歡呼聲”，是固定短語。故the去掉。

9.考查形容詞。句意：因?yàn)橛兄形姆g以及生動的圖畫，我們能很輕松地猜測出英文單詞的意思。這里需用形容詞vivid修飾名詞pictures，故vividly改為vivid。

10.句意：現(xiàn)在，無論我到哪里，這節(jié)難忘的英語課仍然會激勵我成為積極的學(xué)習(xí)者。根據(jù)句意可知這里用wherever表示“無論在哪里”。

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