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12．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高二（1）班的李華，下周五學(xué)生會(huì)將舉辦一期以"My Perfect Teacher"為主題的英文演講活動(dòng)，請你根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容寫一份演講稿介紹英語李老師．
注意：1．不少于60詞，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)以使文章流暢；
2．開頭已給出．
Hello，everyone，I would like to tell you something about Miss Li，who is the perfect teacher in my mind．Miss Li is a lady of medium height，who always wears glasses．Not only is she selfless and optimistic，but she also teaches us to have a positive attitude towards life．（高分句型一）She is a teacher with great responsibility．Whenever I come to her office，I can see her buried in piles of work or talking to a student patiently．She is a good and experienced teacher who can teach based on students'different levels．（高分句型二）She always organizes a variety of activities including vocabulary tests，speech contests，stage performances and so on，which arouse everyone's interest．（高分句型三）She gets on well with the students and we all trust her and are willing to share any secrets with her．
Miss Li works so hard that she is always the first one to come and the last one to leave the office，which encourages me to be a diligent person as she is．（高分句型四）In a word，Miss Li is a perfect teacher deserving our respect．
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Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于開放類作文，根據(jù)提示信息針對"是否父母應(yīng)該被允許看你的微信朋友圈"這一話題開展討論，大家發(fā)表了不同的看法，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：分別從不同觀點(diǎn)和理由兩個(gè)方面來討論該話題 2、要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：not only，but also不僅，而且； a variety of各種各樣的； be willing to愿意做某事；In a word總之；
Not only is she selfless and optimistic，but she also teaches us to have a positive attitude towards life．（高分句型一）
She is a good and experienced teacher who can teach based on students'different levels．（高分句型二）She always organizes a variety of activities including vocabulary tests，speech contests，stage performances and so on，which arouse everyone's interest．（高分句型三）

解答 Hello，everyone，I would like to tell you something about Miss Li，who is a perfect teacher in my mind．
     Miss Li is a lady of medium height，who always wears glasses．Not only is she selfless and optimistic，but she also teaches us to have a positive attitude towards life．（高分句型一）She is a teacher with great responsibility．Whenever I come to her office，I can see her buried in piles of work or talking to a student patiently．She is a good and experienced teacher who can teach based on students'different levels．（高分句型二）She always organizes a variety of activities including vocabulary tests，speech contests，stage performances and so on，which arouse everyone's interest．（高分句型三）She gets on well with the students and we all trust her and are willing to share any secrets with her．
     Miss Li works so hard that she is always the first one to come and the last one to leave the office，which encourages me to be a diligent person as she is．（高分句型四）In a word，Miss Li is a perfect teacher deserving our respect．
     Thanks！

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．