Question

【題目】短文改錯。

Hiking has become popular in China during recent years, and more and more people become hikers, that are called Donkey Friends (驢友) in Chinese. A discussion about hiking has held in our class. Some students think that hiking during vacation can make people to feel healthier, fresher and more harmonious with nature. They find themselves deep attracted by the beauty of nature. They can also be relaxing walking in deep mountains. But nowadays some hikers even begin to explore the places people have never been to, and accidents have been happened now and then because poor knowledge of hiking. Some hikers even lost their life. The other students in our class think it not safe to organize so dangerous activities. They make suggestions which laws should be passed and hikers should be trained before they attend the activities.

Answer 1

【答案】Hiking has become popular in China during recent years, and more and more people become hikers, are called Donkey Friends (驢友) in Chinese. A discussion about hiking has held in our class. Some students think that hiking during vacation can make people to feel healthier, fresher and more harmonious with nature. They find themselves attracted by the beauty of nature. They can also be walking in deep mountains. But nowadays some hikers even begin to explore the places people have never been to, and accidents have happened now and then because poor knowledge of hiking. Some hikers even lost their . The other students in our class think it not safe to organize dangerous activities. They make suggestions laws should be passed and hikers should be trained before they attend the activities.

【解析】

試題分析：第一處：are called Donkey Friends (驢友) in Chinese.是定語從句修飾先行詞hikers，先行詞指人，定語從句中缺少主語，且此處是非限制性定語從句，故把that改為who。

第二處：A discussion和hold之間是被動關(guān)系，應(yīng)該用現(xiàn)在完成時的被動語態(tài)，故在has后面加been。

第三處：make sb. do sth.是固定結(jié)構(gòu)，意為“使某人做某事”，故去掉feel前面的to。

第四處：修飾動詞attract用副詞，故把deep改為deeply。

第五處：relaxing表示“令人放松的”，表示“感到放松的”應(yīng)該是relaxed，故把relaxing改為relaxed。

第六處：happen是不及物動詞，無被動形式，而且accidents與happen之間也是主動關(guān)系，故去掉happened前面的been。

第七處：because后面接句子，此處poor knowledge of hiking是名詞短語，要用because of，故在because后面加of。

第八處：句子主語是Some hikers，那么“失去他們的生命”也應(yīng)該是復(fù)數(shù)，故把life改為lives。

第九處：在“so/such+形容詞+名詞”結(jié)構(gòu)中，如果名詞是復(fù)數(shù)形式，用such，故把so改為such。

第十處：laws should be passed and hikers should be trained before they attend the activities是同位語從句，作suggestions的同位語，對suggestions的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行解釋，同位語從句中結(jié)構(gòu)完整，應(yīng)該用that引導(dǎo)，故把which改為that。本句句意：他們提出了制定法律以及步行者在參加活動前應(yīng)該進(jìn)行培訓(xùn)的建議。