Question

9．如今城市共享單車越來越流行，請你就此話題談一談共享單車的好處．
內(nèi)容要點：
1．方便快捷；
2．緩解交通壓力，環(huán)保；
3．有益于健康．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)：100詞左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．參考詞匯：共享單車bicycle sharing  道路擁堵road congestion．
With the development of technology，bicycle sharing is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation in many cities．
There are quite a few advantages of it．Firstly，bicycle sharing makes it convenient for people to move around．You can find a bicycle anywhere at any time when you want to go out for a cycling with a very low charge．Secondly，it relieves the traffic pressure caused by cars and buses，reducing road congestion．Meanwhile，as a green way of transport，it does good to the environment．What's more，riding a bike is a good way of taking exercise，which is helpful for people to keep fit．．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等
高分句型一：
With the development of technology，bicycle sharing is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation in many cities．
隨著科技的發(fā)展，自行車共享成為許多城市交通的一種新趨勢．
高分句型二：
What's more，riding a bike is a good way of taking exercise，which is helpful for people to keep fit．
更重要的是，騎自行車是鍛煉身體的好方法，有助于人們保持健康．

解答 With the development of technology，bicycle sharing is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation in many cities（高分句型一）．
There are quite a few advantages of it．Firstly，bicycle sharing makes it convenient for people to move around．You can find a bicycle anywhere at any time when you want to go out for a cycling with a very low charge．Secondly，it relieves the traffic pressure caused by cars and buses，reducing road congestion．Meanwhile，as a green way of transport，it does good to the environment．What's more，riding a bike is a good way of taking exercise，which is helpful for people to keep fit（高分句型二）．

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．