【題目】假如你是James，在收到祖父的戒煙建議信后，很受觸動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你寫一封E-mail回信給祖父，

陳述你對(duì)于吸煙危害的重新認(rèn)識(shí)及所采 用的有效的戒煙方法，并表達(dá)對(duì)祖父的感激之情。

文章開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出。

寫作要求：

1. 在信中要包括兩點(diǎn)對(duì)于吸煙危害的認(rèn)識(shí)和兩點(diǎn)有效的戒煙方法。

2. 不要分條列舉，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。

3. 字?jǐn)?shù)：120左右。

Dear Grandad,

It is a peaceful night while I'm sitting at the computer writing to you with a willing heart.

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Yours truly,

James

【答案】It is a peaceful night while I'm sitting at the computer writing to you with a willing heart.

Smoking, which may be a pleasure for some people, is a series of discomforts for their fellows. Medical scientists have expressed their concern about the effect of smoking on the health not only of those who are smoking but also of those who live in the air polluted by tobacco smoke. And studies show that non-smokers suffer more than the smokers themselves.

A great number of students have joined in trying to persuade the university to forbid smoking. Smoking is not allowed in theatres, cinemas and in other public places. Therefore, smoking must be forbidden in our classrooms.

Although many people have passed away for having smoked a lot and we call on people to give up smoking, yet many more will turn down what we say every day. I think it more important to call on the smoker to use good judgment and to show concern for others.

Yours truly,

James

【解析】試題分析：

本文要求收到祖父的戒煙建議信后，給祖父回復(fù)一封E-mail，陳述自己對(duì)于吸煙危害的重新認(rèn)識(shí)及所采用的有效的戒煙方法，并表達(dá)對(duì)祖父的感激之情。文章給出了提綱，成文時(shí)應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：(1) 不需要分條列舉，在信中要包括兩點(diǎn)對(duì)于吸煙危害的認(rèn)識(shí)和兩點(diǎn)有效的戒煙方法。(2)人稱使用要恰當(dāng)。(3)時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。(4)適當(dāng)使用一些連詞和插入語(yǔ)，使文章自然、流暢。(5)恰當(dāng)使用一些高級(jí)詞匯和句型，以增加文章的檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

1.使用高級(jí)句型：包含非限制性定語(yǔ)從句的句子Smoking, which may be a pleasure for some people, is a series of discomforts for their fellows.；使用定語(yǔ)從句的句子…not only of those who are smoking but also of those who live in the air polluted by tobacco smoke. ；賓語(yǔ)從句yet many more will turn down what we say every day.；使用it作形式賓語(yǔ)I think it more important to call on the smoker to use good judgment and to show concern for others.2.使用了過渡詞語(yǔ)：therefore, although，yet等。3.使用了重要句型和短語(yǔ)： not only …but also不僅…而且；more than多于，不止，超過；a great number of很多；pass away去世；turn down拒絕.

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