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20．假定你是李華，請給正在你校學(xué)習(xí)的英語交換生Bob寫封郵件，通知他周末有義工活動，詢問他是否參加．主要內(nèi)容包括：
1．主題：撿垃圾；
2．時(shí)間地點(diǎn)；
3．注意事項(xiàng)．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Bob，
I am writing to inform you that a voluntary activity is to be held this Sunday．
As you know，the litter dropped around has affected the image of the city，so we are scheduled to collect and classify rubbish in Renmin Park．（高分句型一）I know you have a strong sense of social commitment and have always involved yourself in voluntary activities．（高分句型二）If you have intention to join us，we can meet at the school gate at 9：00 a．m．This activity will last （for） two hours．If you are willing to come，you'd better take gloves with you in case you might get hurt．（高分句型三）After all，safety goes first．Comfortable sneakers are also highly recommended．
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假定你是李華，請給正在你校學(xué)習(xí)的英語交換生Bob寫封郵件，通知他周末有義工活動，詢問他是否參加．寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：主題：撿垃圾；時(shí)間地點(diǎn)；注意事項(xiàng)．  2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：As you know正如你說知；be willing to 愿意做；in case以防；After all首先；Look forward to 盼望；
As you know，the litter dropped around has affected the image of the city，so we are scheduled to collect and classify rubbish in Renmin Park．（高分句型一）
I know you have a strong sense of social commitment and have always involved yourself in voluntary activities．（高分句型二）
If you are willing to come，you'd better take gloves with you in case you might get hurt．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Bob，
      I am writing to inform you that a voluntary activity is to be held this Sunday．
      As you know，the litter dropped around has affected the image of the city，so we are scheduled to collect and classify rubbish in Renmin Park．（高分句型一）I know you have a strong sense of social commitment and have always involved yourself in voluntary activities．（高分句型二）If you have intention to join us，we can meet at the school gate at 9：00 a．m．This activity will last （for） two hours．If you are willing to come，you'd better take gloves with you in case you might get hurt．（高分句型三）After all，safety goes first．Comfortable sneakers are also highly recommended．
      Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．