分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息假定你是李華,你的美國筆友Bob對去年你在中國西部支教的事情很感興趣.請給Bob寫一封郵件,分享你的經(jīng)歷.寫作時注意以下幾點:1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個要點:你的支教經(jīng)歷;你的支教感受 2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫.本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài).4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點.
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達:take part in參加;set off出發(fā);To my delight令我高興的是;In order to以便,為了;call for呼吁,號召;Apparently明顯的;look forward to盼望;
I'm glad to share my experience of being a volunteer teacher for Rural Education Support Project.(高分句型一)
On July 15,I set off from my hometown and two days later,I arrived at the school in a poor village in the south west of China,where I received a warm welcome.(高分句型二)
In order to help rural students gain better reading resources,I posted the information of rural schools on the Internet,calling for more help.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Bob,
I'm glad to share my experience of being a volunteer teacher for Rural Education Support Project.(高分句型一)
The project aims to help the students in poverty-stricken areas have the chance to receive better education.I took part in the activities last summer holiday.On July 15,I set off from my hometown and two days later,I arrived at the school in a poor village in the south west of China,where I received a warm welcome.(高分句型二)I taught the pupils English there.To my delight,they were interested in what I taught them.
In order to help rural students gain better reading resources,I posted the information of rural schools on the Internet,calling for more help.(高分句型三)Apparently the power of an individual is not enough,so I hope all of us can give them a hand.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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