【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Last weekend, after finish my homework,I wanted to relax me, so I went to the cinema to watch Journey to the West with my friends. We hoped to enjoy ourselves there. However,some of the people there makes me feel very unhappy.

When we arrived there, the movie been on for ten minutes. We found our seats quick and sat down. What's worse,a few guys were talking loudly or even shouting when they saw some excited pictures. Also, some people threw away plastic bag, paper and other rubbish on the floor, that made the floor very dirty.

As we know, the cinema is a public place where we can have a nice time. All of us are supposed to obey the rules in the public. Only in this way can we make public places more comfortable.

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【解析】

這是一篇記敘文。文章講述了上周末，作者完成了家庭作業(yè)，想要放松一下。于是，和朋友們?nèi)タ措娪暗脑愀獾慕?jīng)歷。

第一處：考查現(xiàn)在分詞。“完成”的邏輯主語是“我”，它們之間是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，用現(xiàn)在分詞作時(shí)間狀語，所以finish改成finishing。

第二處：考查固定用法。句意：上周末我完成了我的家庭作業(yè)，想要放松一下。relax oneself放松自己；放松某人自己，這是一個(gè)固定用法，所以me改成myself。

第三處：考查時(shí)態(tài)。作者在回憶上周末的事情，用一般過去時(shí)，所以makes改成made。

第四處：考查時(shí)態(tài)。句意：當(dāng)我們到達(dá)那里時(shí)，電影已經(jīng)開始十分鐘了�！拔覀兊竭_(dá)那里”已經(jīng)是發(fā)生在過去的事情，“電影已經(jīng)開始十分鐘” 發(fā)生在“我們到達(dá)那里”之前，表示發(fā)生在過去的過去，用過去完成時(shí)，所以been前面加had。

第五處：考查副詞。found是動(dòng)詞，修飾動(dòng)詞，用副詞，所以quick改成 quickly。

第六處：考查連詞。句意：更糟糕的是，有幾個(gè)人在看到令人激動(dòng)的畫面時(shí)，大聲地談?wù)摚踔潦窃诤敖�。“大聲地談�(wù)摗迸c“甚至是在喊叫”之間是并列關(guān)系，所以用并列連詞，or改成and。

第七處：考查形容詞。v+ing修飾物，v+ed修飾人，題干中修飾“pictures”畫面，是物，所以excited改成exciting。

第八處：考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。句意：一些人往地上亂扔塑料袋、紙屑和其他的垃圾，這使得地面非常的臟�！八芰洗笔菑�(fù)數(shù)，用名詞復(fù)數(shù)，所以bag改成bags。

第九處：考查非限制性定語從句。which made the floor very dirty.在復(fù)合句中作定語，修飾前面整個(gè)主句內(nèi)容，逗號把主從句隔開，所以which made the floor very dirty.是一個(gè)非限制性定語從句，修飾前面整個(gè)主句內(nèi)容，只能用which，故that改成which。

第十處：考查固定短語。句意：我們所有人都應(yīng)該遵守公共場所的規(guī)則。in public公共場所，這是一個(gè)固定短語，所以去掉the。

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