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【題目】為了幫助中學生健康成長，某中學英文報開辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”專欄。假設你是該欄目的編輯Jamie，收到一封署名為Worried的求助信。信中該同學向你訴說了自己的困擾：近日容易發(fā)脾氣，使正常的學習和生活受到了影響。請用英文給該同學寫一封回信。

內容要點如下：

1．表示理解并給予安慰；

2．提出建議并說明理由。

注意：1.詞數(shù)120左右；

2. 信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關的信息；

3.信的開頭與結尾已為你擬好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：temper n. 脾氣，情緒

Hi Worried,

I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment.

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Yours,

Jamie

Answer 1

【答案】

Hi Worried,

I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong,so you don't have to worry so much.The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you'll regret.Here are three useful tips:

First,talk to someone you trust about how you feel.This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself.Second,go outdoors and play games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger.And third,remain optimistic about your future.Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.

I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.

【解析】

本篇作文是一篇信件式的提建議的文章，首先文章的中心明確，本文以我提出建議，幫助那位同學解決脾氣暴躁生活不順的問題為中心。其次，本文的結構鮮明，現(xiàn)表明他的問題是一個普遍問題，然后自上而下分別根據(jù)題干提供的信息提出自己的建議，最后送出對那位同學的祝愿。最后文中的用詞用句值得我們學習，如：Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.這句話中被動語態(tài)的運用，The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong，賓語從句的運用。get rid of等好短語的運用。