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11．假設(shè)你是李華，某英語報發(fā)起了題為"我看00后"的論壇活動．請根據(jù)以下要點用英語給報社編輯部寫一封信，談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ畠?nèi)容包括：
1.00后的優(yōu)點：樂于接受并嘗試新事物；珍惜友情；
00后的不足：依賴性強(qiáng)；自控力差；
2．你的看法．
注意：1．書信的頭尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
2．文章必須包括以上所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．詞數(shù)100左右．
參考詞匯：00后  the post-2000's generation
Dear Editor，
Knowing that you are gathering opinions on the post-2000's generation，I'm writing to share my idea．（高分句型一）
As teenagers，many of them are dependent on their parents in life or teachers in study．Worse still，lacking the ability to control themselves seems to be common among them．However，they are fond of new things，ready to accept and try them，which makes them ore creative．（高分句型二）Moreover，they treasure friendship and are good at communicating with others．
They are such a promising generation．I strongly believe，that they will create a better future with proper guiding．（高分句型三）
Best wishes!
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息 假設(shè)你是李華，某英語報發(fā)起了題為"我看00后"的論壇活動．請根據(jù)以下要點用英語給報社編輯部寫一封信，談?wù)勀愕目捶?nbsp;  寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：00后的優(yōu)點：樂于接受并嘗試新事物；珍惜友情；00后的不足：依賴性強(qiáng)；自控力差；你的看法．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：be dependent on 對…依賴；Worse still更糟糕的是；However然而；be fond of 喜歡；Moreover而且；be good at擅長；
Knowing that you are gathering opinions on the post-2000's generation，I'm writing to share my idea．（高分句型一）
However，they are fond of new things，ready to accept and try them，which makes them ore creative．（高分句型二）
I strongly believe，that they will create a better future with proper guiding．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Editor，
      Knowing that you are gathering opinions on the post-2000's generation，I'm writing to share my idea．（高分句型一）
      As teenagers，many of them are dependent on their parents in life or teachers in study．Worse still，lacking the ability to control themselves seems to be common among them．However，they are fond of new things，ready to accept and try them，which makes them ore creative．（高分句型二）Moreover，they treasure friendship and are good at communicating with others．
     They are such a promising generation．I strongly believe，that they will create a better future with proper guiding．（高分句型三）
     Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．