Question

【題目】假設(shè)你叫李鳴，得知鄭州國際會展中心(ZZICEC)正在招募志愿者的消息，你想在2016年寒假當(dāng)志愿者，現(xiàn)在你需要根據(jù)志愿者的報名條件寫一封英文申請信。

志愿者報名條件：

1． 年齡大于15歲，身體健康； 2． 英語口語好，樂于助人； 3． 能參加培訓(xùn)，寒假期間能連續(xù)服務(wù)兩周以上。

注意：詞數(shù)100左右，信的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a senior one student, applying to be a volunteer for ZZICEC in the winter of 2016.

___________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a senior one student, applying to be a volunteer for ZZICEC in the winter of 2016. I’m 16 years old. I think I’m old enough to have some social service so that I can gain more experience. English is my favorite at school and I can express myself well in English. Being healthy and active, I’m glad to help others. I hope to improve myself by volunteering and giving help to people. Next winter I will have a two-month holiday. I prefer a different holiday then. I hope I can join in the training activities and work for ZZICEC.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】

試題分析：假設(shè)你叫李鳴，得知鄭州國際會展中心(ZZICEC)正在招募志愿者的消息，你想在2016年寒假當(dāng)志愿者，現(xiàn)在你需要根據(jù)志愿者的報名條件寫一封英文申請信。志愿者報名條件：1． 年齡大于15歲，身體健康； 2． 英語口語好，樂于助人； 3． 能參加培訓(xùn)，寒假期間能連續(xù)服務(wù)兩周以上。注意：詞數(shù)100左右，信的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

【亮點說明】本文是一篇申請信，內(nèi)容齊全，格式正確，句子銜接緊密，使用高級句子。I am a senior one student, applying to be a volunteer for ZZICEC in the winter of 2016.現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨狀態(tài)；I think I’m old enough to have some social service so that I can gain more experience.賓語從句和so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句完美結(jié)合；Being healthy and active, I’m glad to help others.現(xiàn)在分詞做原因狀語。