【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處錯(cuò)誤。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線, 并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2. 只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Dear David,

How time flies! It’s been an entirely week since you left our school. You can’t imagine what I miss the time we spent together in the past! You gave me so much advices! You help me learn English! I am very happy to be your friend and grateful for your help with my English. Because of I have learned a lot from you, I am more confident of your future study. I really got pleasure from speak English with you.

Although we are not in a same country now, our friendship will last forever. And I will try my best learn English and make some friend.

Yours,

Li Hua

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【解析】

這是一封感謝信,主要是感謝對(duì)方幫助作者學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)。

第一處:考查形容詞。句意自從你離開我們學(xué)校已經(jīng)一整周了。此處應(yīng)該用形容詞修飾后面的名詞,故entirely改為entire。

第二處:考查賓語(yǔ)從句。句意:你無法想像我是多么想像我們過去一起度過的日子。imagine后為賓語(yǔ)從句,從句中主謂賓齊全,缺少狀語(yǔ),而what在從句中擔(dān)當(dāng)主語(yǔ)或賓語(yǔ),故what改為how。

第三處:考查名詞。句意:你給了我那么多建議。advice為不可數(shù)名詞,沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式。故advices改為advice。

第四處:考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。句意:你幫助我學(xué)英語(yǔ)。根據(jù)文章可知,現(xiàn)在David已經(jīng)走了,幫助我學(xué)英語(yǔ)是過去的事情,所以應(yīng)該用一般過去時(shí)。故help改為helped。

第五處:考查連詞。句意:因?yàn)槲覐哪闵砩蠈W(xué)了很多,我對(duì)我將來的學(xué)習(xí)更有信心了。because of是介詞短語(yǔ),后面加名詞,代詞,動(dòng)名詞等名詞性的東西,because后面加句子,而此處后面為句子,故去掉of。

第六處:考查代詞。句意:因?yàn)槲覐哪闵砩蠈W(xué)了很多,我對(duì)我將來的學(xué)習(xí)更有信心了。此處表達(dá)的是對(duì)我自己的將來充滿信心,故your改為my。

第七處:考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。句意:我真的從和你一起說英語(yǔ)中得到了樂趣。from為介詞,后面加動(dòng)名詞。故speak改為speaking。

第八處:考查冠詞。句意:雖然現(xiàn)在我們不在同一個(gè)國(guó)家,但是我們友誼會(huì)永遠(yuǎn)長(zhǎng)存。same前加定冠詞the,這是固定搭配。故a改為the。

第九處:考查不定式。句意:我會(huì)盡我全力去學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ),交更多的朋友。try one’s best to do sth.盡力做某事,是固定搭配,故learn前加to。

第十處:考查名詞。句意:我會(huì)盡我全力去學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ),交更多的朋友!案嗟呐笥选睉(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)形式,故friend改為friends。

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