分析 本文是讀寫任務型寫作,這類作文可按照三段式模板寫:第一段:概況所給短文要點.第二段:過渡詞引出主題句---闡述理由.第三段:個人觀點.特別要注意第一段的概括.用自己的語言概括,不能照搬照抄原文. 時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時.人稱用第一和第三人稱. 重要短語:set a regulation (制度定規(guī)章制度),civilized communication(文明交流),fall in love with…(與…談戀愛),resist sth(抵制某事),disturb sb (干擾,擾亂某人),carry out (實施,執(zhí)行),be of great help (有幫助),take control of(控制),hold a right attitude towards(持有一個正確的態(tài)度),get on well with (與…相處),keep a certain personal distance(保持一定的私人距離),bury oneself in…(全身心投入),because of(由于).
【高分句型一】
1.we know a school has set a regulation about civilized communication between boys and girls to prevent students falling in love at an early age,which has caused different opinions.
此處是由關系代詞"which"引導的非限制性定語從句,關系代詞"which"在從句中作主語,指代前面整個主句的內(nèi)容.
【高分句型二】
2.In our daily school life some students can't resist the opposite gender's attraction,disturbing themselves.
此處是現(xiàn)在分詞短語"disturbing themselves"作伴隨狀語,主句為"In our daily school life some students can't resist the opposite gender's attraction",主句的主語為"some students"與動詞"disturb"構成邏輯上的主動關系.
【高分句型三】
3.With such a school rule carried out,it's of great help for them to take control of themselves and realize the harm of abnormal communication.
此處"with復合結構"作原因狀語,結構為"with+賓語(物)+賓補(過去分詞)",主句為"it's of great help for them to take control of themselves and realize the harm of abnormal communication.".
【高分句型四】
4.keeping a certain personal distance is extremely necessary.
此處是由動名詞短語"keeping a certain personal distance"作主語,謂語動詞用單數(shù).
【高分句型五】
5.It's of great importance for me to bury myself in my school work before I regret only because of my puppy(early)love.
此處為此處是主語從句,結構為"It+be+of+名詞+for sb+to do sth".
解答 From the article,we know a school has set a regulation about civilized communication between boys and girls to prevent students falling in love at an early age,which has caused different opinions.【高分句型一】(概括)
In our daily school life some students can't resist the opposite gender's attraction,disturbing themselves.【高分句型二】With such a school rule carried out,it's of great help for them to take control of themselves and realize the harm of abnormal communication.【高分句型三】Meanwhile,however,it's not good for the students'emotional development and normal relationship.(說明現(xiàn)實生活中許多人雖有夢想但沒有實現(xiàn)的原因)
Personally,I hold a right attitude towards communication with the opposite gender.I'll get on well with my classmates no matter whether they are boys or girls,but keeping a certain personal distance is extremely necessary.【高分句型四】It's of great importance for me to bury myself in my school work before I regret only because of my puppy(early)love.【高分句型五】(個人觀點:談談對異性交往的看法)
點評 讀寫任務型寫作是將閱讀與寫作有機結合,要求考生既能讀懂文章信息,又要依據(jù)要求規(guī)范連貫地表達內(nèi)容,其中準確概括很有挑戰(zhàn)且十分重要,根據(jù)記敘文、議論文、說明文等不同文體作相應概括,總的來說,遵循以下步驟:確定主題句;尋找關鍵詞;重構主題句;重組支持句.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關系,盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次,平時需注意積累短語和重要句型.
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