7.假設(shè)你是李華,今天上午你和交換生Lucy因小事吵架.下午,你想請她看電影Beauty and Beast作為道歉.請給她寫一張便條.
要點(diǎn):1.表達(dá)你的歉意;
2.請她看電影;
3.晚上7:30,萬達(dá)廣場電影院.
注意:1.詞數(shù):100左右;
2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;
3.開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù).
Dear Lucy,
I am so sorry that I quarreled with you this morning.I regret having said something unpleasant to you.I didn't control myself well at that time.In order to make it up,I plan to invite you to see a film with me together.(高分句型一)
The film is called Beauty and Beast,which tells a romantic love story between a common girl and a prince,who becomes a beast in the film.(高分句型二)I have bought 2 tickets.And I will wait for you at Wanda Square at 7:00 pm,for the film will begin 30 minutes later.(高分句型三)
I do apologize for what I did again.Please be there on time.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua.

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息 假設(shè)你是李華,今天上午你和交換生Lucy因小事吵架.下午,你想請她看電影Beauty and Beast作為道歉.請給她寫一張便條,寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,要點(diǎn)包括:表達(dá)你的歉意;請她看電影;晚上7:30,萬達(dá)廣場電影院.2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫.本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài).4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):quarrel with與…爭吵;regret having done后悔已經(jīng)做過某事;In order to 以便,為了;apologize for因?yàn)椤狼;wait for 等待
In order to make it up,I plan to invite you to see a film with me together.(高分句型一)
The film is called Beauty and Beast,which tells a romantic love story between a common girl and a prince,who becomes a beast in the film.(高分句型二)
And I will wait for you at Wanda Square at 7:00 pm,for the film will begin 30 minutes later.(高分句型三)

解答 Dear Lucy,
      I am so sorry that I quarreled with you this morning.I regret having said something unpleasant to you.I didn't control myself well at that time.In order to make it up,I plan to invite you to see a film with me together.(高分句型一)
     The film is called Beauty and Beast,which tells a romantic love story between a common girl and a prince,who becomes a beast in the film.(高分句型二)I have bought 2 tickets.And I will wait for you at Wanda Square at 7:00 pm,for the film will begin 30 minutes later.(高分句型三)
      I do apologize for what I did again.Please be there on time.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                               Yours sincerely,
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力.在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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