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增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)(\)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

I’d like to share a unforgettable experience with you.It happened in a warm Sunday afternoon in August.I go shopping with my cousin，Li Ming.When walk in the street，we found a young man，who was big but strong，stealing a woman’s wallet.We stopped her immediately.Though he stared at us angry，we didn’t feel frightened and tried to make him to realize his bad behavior.Because our bravery，he left without saying a word.The woman thought highly of us for which we had done.In my opinion，it’s our duty to fight against bad behaviors.

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本文是一篇記敘文。作者敘述的是一次阻止小偷偷東西的事跡。以作者看來(lái)，與不良行為作斗爭(zhēng)是我們的責(zé)任。

1.考查不定冠詞。unforgettable以元音音素開(kāi)頭，表示“一”時(shí)用an，故把a改成an。

2.考查介詞。在某一天的上午、下午、晚上用on，故把in改成on。

3.考查時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)上文happened可知句子用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，故把go改成when。

4.考查現(xiàn)在分詞。句意：走在街上的時(shí)候，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)一個(gè)年輕的男人，他又大又壯，他偷了一個(gè)女人的錢(qián)包。此處句子主語(yǔ)we和walk之間是一種主動(dòng)關(guān)系，用現(xiàn)在分詞做時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)，故把walk改成walking。

5.考查并列連詞。句意：走在街上的時(shí)候，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)一個(gè)年輕的男人，他又大又壯，他偷了一個(gè)女人的錢(qián)包。此處是并列關(guān)系而不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故把but改成and。

6.考查人稱(chēng)代詞。句意：我們立刻阻止了他。根據(jù)上文的man可知把her改成him。

7.考查副詞修飾動(dòng)詞。句意：生氣地盯著我們。此處是副詞修飾動(dòng)詞，故把angry改成angrily。

8.考查動(dòng)詞不定式。make sb. do sth.使某人做某事，故把realize前的to去掉。

9.考查復(fù)合介詞。此處bravery是名詞，because后面跟完整的句子，故在Because后面加of。

10.考查賓語(yǔ)從句引導(dǎo)詞。句意：那女人對(duì)我們所做的事評(píng)價(jià)很高。此處是介詞of后面跟賓語(yǔ)從句，所填引導(dǎo)詞在句中還要做賓語(yǔ)從句的賓語(yǔ)，故把which改成what。

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