Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下短文。短文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

One day, a young man, whom couldn't get back home, came into my office to ask for help. He said his mother was disabled. His phone had stolen with his wallet and he hadn't contacted her for the past two days. However, his job was assessing housing applications, not provide money for travel. I asked him to wait outside unless I finished my work. After work I drove him all the way home. We arrive at his mother's house at 10:30 p.m. .She was in a wheelchair and she answered a door. I saw tears in her eye as she thanked for me. I just hoped that if my son experienced nothing similar, someone would be nicely enough to bring him home to me.

Answer 1

【答案】1.whom—who

2.stolen前加been

3.his-my

4.provide-providing

5.unless—until

6.arrive—arrived

7.eye—eyes

8.thank后for去掉

9.nothing—something

10.nicely—nice

【解析】一個年輕人因為手機被偷，無錢回家來到我的辦公室來尋求幫助。這不屬于我的工作，于是我叫他在外面等我完成工作。下班后，我開車把他送到他有有殘疾的母親家。我這樣做只是希望，如果我的兒子經歷類似的事情，有人會很好地把他帶回家。

1.whom改為who

a young man, whom couldn't get back home, 本句中a young man在定語從句中作主語，必須用主格who，不能用賓格whom。

2.stolen前加been

手表是被偷。所以要用steal的過去完成時的被動形式。即（had） been stolen

3.his改為my

從句意可知是我的工作而不是他的工作是評估住房申請。所以把his改為my。

4.provide改為providing

從句式my job was assessing housing applications, not provide money for travel 來看was doing sth. not (was) doing sth. 所以 provide要改為 providing。

5.unless改為until。

從句意思是我請他在外面等著，一直等到我把工作做完。until一直到……，unless除非……所以把unless改為 until。

6.arrive改為arrived

本段是講過去曾發(fā)生的事，應用一般過去時，而不是一般現(xiàn)在時。 所以要把arrive改為arrived。

7.eye改為eyes

她感謝我時，我看見她眼里有淚水。眼睛是兩只是復數(shù)，所以eye要用復數(shù)eyes。

8.thank后for去掉

thank sb. for sth. .thank后for去掉 ,thanked me .

9.nothing改為something

本句意思是只是希望如果我的兒子有類似的經歷，也會有人會好心地把他帶回家。所以要把nothing改為something.

10.nicely改為nice。

本句是系表結構，缺少表語。表語要用形容詞。所以要把副詞nicely改為形容詞nice。