Question

【題目】Directions: Write an English composition in 100-120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

常言道：“良言一句三冬暖，惡語傷人六月寒”。一句鼓勵(lì)的話能給人帶來溫暖，一句傷人的話會(huì)使人情緒低落。請你結(jié)合某一次經(jīng)歷，講述自己的故事和感受。

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Answer 1

【答案】 As the saying goes, a good word can make people feel warm in winter while a bad word can make them feel cold in summer. It reminds us that simple warm words can lift up a person who loses heart and help him make it through the day while a destructive word to someone depressed can be what it takes to kill him. Here is my story about this saying.

Last summer vacation, I went to the bank alone to withdraw money. But there were a lot of people at the counter, so I used the ATM which also were crowded. I waited at the back of the line and finally it was my turn. But after I inserted my card into the machine, the machine went wrong. I tried many times and failed. People behind me got more and more anxious, and some even started swearing. Just as I was getting really embarrassed, a woman behind me whispered in my ear, “Don’t worry and take your time. Let me help you, kid.” Later, with her help, I managed to withdraw the money.

I was very grateful to that lady, whose words brought great warmth to me. From then on, I also decided to pass on this kind behavior.

【解析】

這是一篇開放性寫作。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，常言道：“良言一句三冬暖，惡語傷人六月寒”。一句鼓勵(lì)的話能給人帶來溫暖，一句傷人的話會(huì)使人情緒低落。請你結(jié)合某一次經(jīng)歷，講述自己的故事和感受。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組）：warmth(溫暖)；hurtful (令人感到傷痛的)；withdraw money (取錢)；go wrong (出毛病)等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。此處文章主要應(yīng)用一般過去時(shí)。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。