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【題目】閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

“Mommy ,don't go,”my three-year-old son screamed as I walked to the door. My fifteen-year-old leaned against the kitchen counter with his arms folded across his chest ,not screaming,but glaring at me as I pulled his little brother off my leg.

“Are you mad at me too?”

“You spend all your time taking care of other people's kids,but what about us?”Dylan left angrily.

I was shocked and a little hurt. How could my own child not understand that the work I was doing was saving live? Then the answer hit me. He didn't know bemuse he had never seen what Healing the Children actually did. Dylan had heard the sores of sick children, but had never once looked into the eyes of a child and understood the hard truth-that without our help, the child would likely die.

“Get dressed. You are going with me.”I said.

I spend the drive explaining the case of Hector to my son, who pretended to ignore me the entire time.“He's seven, only weighs thirty pounds and is very sick. He has a heart condition called Tetralogy of Fallot, which could kill him. It is a miracle(奇跡) that he is still alive. ”

I went on to explain that it took a team of volunteer medical staff to get Hector to the hospital from his remote village and care for him while he was there. Still, Dylan seemed unimpressed.

We stopped at a convenience store for water and snacks. Dylan had one large and one small Slurpee (思樂冰飲料). He said the small one was for Hector. I doubted whether the little guy would be able to drink it, but remained silent. This was the first interest Dylan had shown in being there. I wasn't about to ruin it.

I stopped at the nurse's station to check on Hector's progress while Dylan went to his room. Our patient was recovering physically，but the nurse was concerned that Hector was struggling emotionally. She said “Kids usually bounce back fast, but he hardly speaks and never smiles.”

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Answer 1

【答案】Imagine my surprise when I heard laughter from Hector's room. I entered and found Dylan sitting on the edge of Hector's bed wiping pieces of frozen drink from Hector's mouth. Both boys were giggling and Hector was apparently enjoying the company. I spent the rest of the day speaking to doctors and watching my son playing with the special little boy. It was truly amazing to watch them interact,as if it were the most natural thing in the world. Perhaps to the two of them it was.

On the way home that night ,Dylan asked me several times whether Hector would be okay.I told him this boy would get well but he had a hard road ahead of him.My son seemed to be lost in thought for a while. Then he declared his decision to join Healing the Children as a volunteer to help Hector and other children. I never thought that a moody teenager would take up the volunteer work and never again complain about his mother's crazy work schedule.

【解析】

這是一篇讀后續(xù)寫作文。

通過閱讀所給文章可知，文章主要講敘了講述了作者由于救助病情嚴(yán)重的孩子們這個工作原因不能經(jīng)常陪伴孩子，被孩子誤解后，作者帶孩子去親眼看到生病的孩子，讓他體驗到母親工作的重要性。

續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，第一段開頭是：Imagine my surprise when I heard laughter from Hector's room. 想象我聽到生病的Hector的病房傳出的笑聲感到驚訝。后文應(yīng)當(dāng)描寫作者回來后看到病房的情況，兒子在給Hector擦拭嘴角的飲料，我感悟到這才是自然的和諧。第二段開頭是：On the way home that night ,Dylan asked me several times whether Hector would be okay.兒子很關(guān)心Hector的情況。后文應(yīng)當(dāng)描寫兒子在這次去作者工作的醫(yī)院遇到有心結(jié)的病人Hector之后的變化過程。