Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是高中生李華，有感于校園中存在的隨意涂寫( to scribble )和亂丟垃圾( to litter )的行為，請用英語給校長寫一封100詞左右的信。信中應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：

1. 說明寫信目的；

2. 對這些行為進行批評；

3. 提出建議。

注意：信的開頭、落款及信的第一句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

July 13, 2018

Dear Mr. Headmaster,

I am Li Hua, a student from Class One, Senior Two.

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Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】July 13, 2018

Dear Mr. Headmaster,

I'mLi Hua，astudentfromClassOne，Senior Two. I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behaviour among us students：littering and scribbling.

It makes our school dirty and unpleasant and does harm to the image of our school. I always feel ashamed whenever I see this. It is clearly not appropriate for a student to litter and scribble about. I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behaviour. At the same time，students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves.

I believe that，with the joint efforts of both teachers and students，our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future. Thank you for your consideration.

Yoursfaithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封書信。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本文是一封書信：假設(shè)你是高中生李華，有感于校園中存在的隨意涂寫( to scribble )和亂丟垃圾( to litter )的行為，請用英語給校長寫一封100詞左右的信。信中應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：說明寫信目的；對這些行為進行批評；提出建議。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求確定關(guān)鍵詞，如：a student from Class One，Senior Two（來自高二一班的一名學(xué)生）；draw your attention to some improper behaviour（一些不適當(dāng)?shù)男袨橐�起你的注意）�?/span>littering and scribbling（亂丟廢物和亂涂）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)語態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。