Question

假設(shè)最近某校就同學(xué)們的習(xí)慣養(yǎng)成問題展開了討論。請你根據(jù)下表所提示的信息，用英語寫一篇題為  A good habit, a successful life 的短文，發(fā)表在該校的網(wǎng)站上。字?jǐn)?shù)120左右。

良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣	1. 上課注意力集中 2. 充分利用自習(xí)時間3. 獨(dú)立完成作業(yè)…
良好的生活習(xí)慣	1. 健康的飲食   2. 規(guī)律的運(yùn)動   3. 充足的睡眠…
養(yǎng)成良好的習(xí)慣的好處	1. 好習(xí)慣對生活有積極地影響 2…   3…(請考生結(jié)合自身感受補(bǔ)充兩點(diǎn))

     A habit is something that you do often or regularly almost without thinking, especially something that is hard to stop doing.

Answer 1

One possible version：
A habit is something that you do often or regularly almost without thinking, especially something that is hard to stop doing.
We should develop good habits of learning. For example, we should concentrate our attention in class, which will help us better understand what teachers say. Also, we are supposed to make the best of the time for independent study, which can improve our ability to learn by ourselves. Finally, we are encouraged to finish homework alone.
At the same time, good habits of living are also good for our life. Healthy eating along with regular exercise is probably the only way to become fit. What is more, a good amount of sleep every night is also important for our health, for it makes us feel energetic and well prepared for the day to come.
Good habits have a positive effect on our life. Once a good habit is formed, it will give us power to control ourselves and get rid of bad habits. If we insist on behaving ourselves properly, we are sure to live a successful life.

試題分析：本文要求以A good habit, a successful life為題寫一篇短文談?wù)勱P(guān)于習(xí)慣養(yǎng)成的問題。根據(jù)提示可知文章需要包括三個方面信息，一是良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣；二是良好的生活習(xí)慣；三是良好習(xí)慣給人帶來的好處。在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)安排上可以用三個段落來分別介紹這些內(nèi)容。由于每個方面還有很多細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，所以在寫作時要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞或者過渡詞以使段落層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，比如firstly、secondly、besides、on the one hand 、on the other hand 等。在語言的組織上要注意使用多種句式結(jié)構(gòu)，以及長短句的交替使用，這樣可以形成文章的亮點(diǎn)。此外，根據(jù)文章內(nèi)容可以使用一般現(xiàn)在時。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本篇書面表達(dá)段落清晰，層次分明，語言通順流暢。在介紹各方面習(xí)慣時用到了表示層次關(guān)系和遞進(jìn)關(guān)系的連接詞，比如Also，finally；at the same time ，what is more等，這樣有效地使段落更具有層次感，而不會給人雜亂無章的感覺。在句式方面作者使用了并列句、for it makes us feel energetic and well prepared for the day to come.狀語從句Once a good habit is formed, If we insist on behaving ourselves properly等，給樸素的語言增加了幾分色彩。同時作者在文中使用了很多高級詞匯和短語，比如concentrate on , behave oneself , get rid of 等，這些也顯示了作者較高的語言水平。