Question

最近，你班同學(xué)就“課間是否播放音樂”這個話題展開了討論。請你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，用英語寫一篇短文，陳述討論結(jié)果及個人的看法、建議。

大部分同學(xué)觀點	部分同學(xué)觀點	你的看法
1. 能活躍氣氛。 2. 能使大腦得到放松，減輕學(xué)習(xí)造成的疲勞。 3. 使同學(xué)們在快樂的氛圍中做好下一堂課的準(zhǔn)備。 4. 能給大家?guī)�來快樂�?br />	1. 課間時間太短，播放音樂達(dá)不到預(yù)期的效果。 2. 課間需要的是安靜而不是嘈雜的聲音。	？

Recently a discussion was held in our class about whether music should be played during the break or not. ______________________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

Recently a discussion was held about whether music should be played during the break or not. The opinions are divided
Most of the students think that music should be played .As we know, music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere. Besides, after hard study, music can bring us relaxation, which reduces the tiredness. This can help us make full preparations for the next class. Listening to music also makes us feel happy.
On the other hand, some students don't think so. In their opinion, they can't get the expected effect from playing music, for the class break time is too short. What is needed most during the class break is peace instead of noise produced by music.
In my opinion, it is good to play some soft and peaceful music instead of loud music during the class break. In this way students can enjoy music as well as have a good rest. Besides, I suggest choosing some music that is suitable for middle school students.

試題分析：本文題型是考生非常熟悉的正反觀點類的議論文，討論的話題是“課間是否播放音樂”，有正反兩方面的觀點。要點都給了出來。在平時的練習(xí)中也有相應(yīng)的模板。要注意的是1.在列舉雙方依據(jù)時要盡量使語言多樣化；2.自我觀點表達(dá)時要有正確的判斷，要有辯證的思維。一篇文章需要有正確的句子才能明了清晰的表達(dá)作者的意思。考生應(yīng)明白高考書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求的是將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)意思的能力。審題時注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱以第三人稱為主，發(fā)表個人意見時使用第一人稱。本文的要點均已給出，考生需要使用合適的連接詞把孤立的要點聯(lián)系成文。如for one thing, for another; besides, firstly, secondly, last but not least等。也要使用一些高級的詞匯詞組以提升文章的檔次分。
【亮點說明】范文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，語言使用準(zhǔn)確，短語和句型居多：make full preparations for充分準(zhǔn)備，be  suitable for適合， In this way 以….這種方式，As we know, music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere. 這句話使用了非限制性定語從句， after hard study, music can bring us relaxation, which reduces the tiredness. 這句話也使用了定語從句， What is needed most during the class break is peace instead of noise produced by music.這句話使用了主語從句， it is good to play some soft and peaceful music instead of loud music during the class break. 這句話使用了it做形式主語，還有范文使用了Besides, On the other hand,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。