Question

11．假定你校將舉行一個成人儀式，你將作為代表在儀式上發(fā)言．請你按以下內(nèi)容要點準(zhǔn)備一篇英文發(fā)言稿：
1．過去對成年的向往；
2．現(xiàn)在的感受和認(rèn)識；
3．將來的目標(biāo)及措施．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；
3．發(fā)言稿的開頭已為你寫好（不計入總詞數(shù)）．
Good morning，everyone!
The topic of my speech today is"Thoughts on becoming a grown-up"．
As a child，I always hoped thatI could grow up as soon as possible so thatI could have whateverI wanted and do whateverI liked．NowIama grown-up，butI find things do not go asI expected．AlthoughIcan enjoy more freedom，at the same timeI realize that being a grown-up not only means this，but also moreresponsibilities．I hopeto domore for my parents and society in the future to make my life more meaningful．To reach the goal，I must first try my bestto pass the college entrance examination and enter a gooduniversity．
Thank you for your listening．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等
高分句型一：
As a child，I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked
作為一個孩子，我總是希望我能盡快成長，讓我做什么我想做什么我喜歡做的．
高分句型二：
To reach the goal，I must first try my best to pass the college entrance examination and enter a good university．
為了達(dá)到這個目標(biāo)，我必須盡我最大的努力通過高考，進(jìn)入一所好的大學(xué)．

解答 Good morning，everyone!
The topic of my speech today is"Thoughts on being a grown-up"．
As a child，I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked（高分句型一）．Now I am a grown-up，but I find things do not go as I expected．Although I can enjoy more freedom，at the same time I realize that being a grown-up not only means this，but also more responsibilities．I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life more meaningful．To reach the goal，I must first try my best to pass the college entrance examination and enter a good university（高分句型二）．
Thank you for your listening

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．