Question

假定你是李明， 你的朋友Peter 寫信向你尋求戒掉網(wǎng)癮的方法，來幫助他的弟弟，請你在回信中提出你的建議。要點如下：

用引導的方法讓他認識到上網(wǎng)成癮的危害；

向父母或老師求助，幫他限制上網(wǎng)時間并讓他瀏覽既有吸引力又可開闊視野的網(wǎng)站；

引導他說出自己的困惑或煩惱，這樣可以找出他對網(wǎng)絡游戲依賴的原因。

培養(yǎng)有益身心的愛好來轉移注意力。

注意：1. 請不要逐句翻譯，可適當進行發(fā)揮；

2. 詞數(shù)：150左右。

Dear Peter,

I feel sorry for your brother’s suffering from the Internet addiction.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

Answer 1

Dear Peter,

I feel sorry for your brother’s suffering from the Internet addiction. But don’t be upset. I’ll give you some suggestions.

First, you should communicate with your brother like friends, making him realize the negative effects of the addiction. Second, you can turn to your parents or your brother’s teachers to limit the time spent on the Internet and show the websites that are beneficial and attractive to him. I think in such interaction, he might like to speak out his worries and puzzlement to all of you, which can help you find the reason why he is addicted to computer games. Last but not least, you can help him to develop some healthy interests, such as sending him to some computer training class, going climbing with him to experience the nature, or bringing him to go bungee jumping, which he may like.

I hope such tips can help him get out of the addiction as soon as possible.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

【解析】這是一篇書信寫作。主要說明怎樣幫助Peter的弟弟來戒掉網(wǎng)癮。材料給出的要點已經(jīng)給定大致內容，寫作時要注意適當增加內容，以保證文章的連貫性和豐富性。文章的第二自然段第一句話First, you should communicate with your brother like friends, making him realize the negative effects of the addiction.使用現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語。I think in such interaction, he might like to speak out his worries and puzzlement to all of you, which can help you find the reason why he is addicted to computer games.使用which引導的非限制性定語從句，還有why引導的定語從句。第二自然段最后一句話Last but not least, you can help him to develop some healthy interests, such as sending him to some computer training class, going climbing with him to experience the nature, or bringing him to go bungee jumping, which he may like.使用which引導的非限制性定語從句。同時在短語的使用上面，feel sorry for，suffer from，give sb suggestions，communicate with，turn to sb ，be addicted to，develop some healthy interests，get out of等動詞短語的使用，使得文章的表達更加生動和到位；而Last but not least，such as，as soon as possible等介詞短語的使用，使得文章也更加豐富和靈活。文章在表述順序上使用First，Second，Last but not least使得文章的調理清晰。

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