Question

【題目】假如你是新華中學(xué)的張華，班里從外地轉(zhuǎn)來一名學(xué)生李明，他一時無法融入新的集體當(dāng)中，感到很苦惱。請根據(jù)以下要點用英語給他寫一封信。

1. 幫他分析原因 2. 給他提出建議 3. 陳述你幫助他的具體打算

注意：詞數(shù)120左右（開頭已給出，不算在字?jǐn)?shù)內(nèi)。）

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear LiMing,

I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely. That's because you are new here and people don't know about you. But I think you can make it if only you can follow the advice below.

First, you should take an active part in the discussions and show your own opinions about the matters, and at the same time, learn to listen to other people's views. Second, you should learn about your classmates' likes and dislikes. Then you can have much in common with them. This way, you can get to know more different people and show them that you are just as friendly. Last but not least, I'm always here ready to help. we can take part in some activities together and I can introduce you to others.

With time going on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can do as the above.

Best regards,

Zhang Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)是要求寫一封信，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。2、仔細(xì)研讀題目所給信息，不要誤解信息，也不要漏掉要點，明確自己是以哪個身份來寫這封信。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)。 4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)，符合書信口吻和語氣。詞匯短語豐富，如having trouble communicating with，your classmates' likes and dislikes。還用到了first、second和the last but not least，結(jié)構(gòu)分明，很有層次感。