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9．假如你叫李華，是銅陵的一名中學(xué)生．最近，當(dāng)?shù)卣�府正在�?shí)施快速公交和橋梁建設(shè)，結(jié)果引起人們的廣泛爭(zhēng)議．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)人們不同的觀點(diǎn)，給當(dāng)?shù)貓?bào)社寫(xiě)一封信，發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)．

贊成觀點(diǎn)	反對(duì)觀點(diǎn)
1．能夠解決交通問(wèn)題，方便人民生活； 2．有助于發(fā)展經(jīng)濟(jì)，提高人民生活水平； 3．有助于提高銅陵作為現(xiàn)代化旅游城市的形象．	1．會(huì)造成環(huán)境污染； 2．會(huì)產(chǎn)生噪音，打擾居民平靜的生活； 3．時(shí)常造成交通堵塞．
你的觀點(diǎn)…

注意：1．信的開(kāi)頭已給出，但不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)．
2．不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容使行文連貫．
3．詞數(shù)120左右．    
參考詞匯：快速公交系統(tǒng) BRT
高架橋 overpass
Dear Edtor，
I'm writing to you about the road construction which is taking place in our city．
                                                       
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于圖表類作文，根據(jù)提示信息最近，當(dāng)?shù)卣�府正在�?shí)施快速公交和橋梁建設(shè)，結(jié)果引起人們的廣泛爭(zhēng)議．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)人們不同的觀點(diǎn)，給當(dāng)?shù)貓?bào)社寫(xiě)一封信，發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：分別從贊成觀點(diǎn)和反對(duì)觀點(diǎn)兩個(gè)方面來(lái)討論該話題 2、圖表是文章的總體框架，要在圖表的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：take place舉行，發(fā)生；carry out 執(zhí)行，實(shí)施；besides另外；as well as也，和；now and then不時(shí)地；Personally就個(gè)人而言；however然而；do good to對(duì)…有益；
Recently the local government has decided to broaden some narrow roads and build BRT，which has aroused a heated discussion．（高分句型一）
Some agree that we should carry out this construction project because it can solve some traffic problems and make our life convenient and comfortable； besides，it helps promote the economy and improve people's living environment as well as the image of Tongling as a modern tourist city．（高分句型二）
However，I think the construction project will certainly do a lot of good to the city and bring  convenience to the residence in the future．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Editor，
      I'm writing to you about the construction project which is taking place in our city．Recently the local government has decided to broaden some narrow roads and build BRT，which has aroused a heated discussion．（高分句型一）
      Some agree that we should carry out this construction project because it can solve some traffic problems and make our life convenient and comfortable； besides，it helps promote the economy and improve people's living environment as well as the image of Tongling as a modern tourist city．（高分句型二）
      But others believe that the construction work may cause air pollution．And traffic jams appear now and then．Even worse，the noise produced by the work will disturb people's peaceful life．
      Personally，the overpasses in the street may somewhat damage the appearance of our city．However，I think the construction project will certainly do a lot of good to the city and bring  convenience to the residence in the future．（高分句型三）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours truly，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                           Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．