Question

【題目】閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

The Board Meeting had come to an end. Bob started to stand up and knocked into the table, spilling his coffee over his notes. 'How embarrassing! I am getting so clumsy(笨拙的) in my old age. '

Everyone had a good laugh, and soon we were all telling stories of our most embarrassing moments. It came around to Frank, who sat quietly listening to the others. Someone said, 'Come on, Frank. Tell us your most embarrassing moment. '

Frank laughed and began to tell us of his childhood. 'I grew up in San Pedro. My Dad was a fisherman. He had his own boat, but it was hard making a living on the sea. He worked hard and would stay out until he caught enough to feed a big family. Not just enough for our family, but also for his Mom and Dad and the other kids that were still at home. '

He looked at us and said, 'I wish you could have met my Dad. He was strong from pulling the nets and fighting the seas for his catch. When you got close to him, he smelled like the ocean. No matter how much my mother washed his clothes, they would still smell of the sea and of fish. '

Frank's voice dropped a bit. 'When the weather was bad, he would drive me to school. He had this old truck that he used in his fishing business. That truck was older than he was. Half the time, he would slam to a stop and the old truck would belch(噴出) a cloud of smoke. He would pull right up in front, and it seemed like everybody would be standing around and watching. Then he would lean over and give me a goodbye kiss on the cheek and tell me to be a good boy. It was so embarrassing for me. Here, I was twelve years old. I was a big boy and my Dad would lean over and kiss me goodbye! '

He paused and then went on, 'I remember the day I decided I was too old for a goodbye kiss. When we got to the school and came to a stop, he had his usual big smile. He started to lean toward me, but I put my hand up and said, 'No, Dad. ' '

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注意：1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 150 左右；

2. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；

Paragraph 1:

It was the first time I had ever talked to him that way, and he had this surprised look on his face.

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Paragraph 2:

Frank got a funny look on his face, and the tears began to well up in his eyes.

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Answer 1

【答案】Paragraph 1:

It was the first time I had ever talked to him that way, and he had this surprised look on his face. I said, 'Dad, I'm too old for a goodbye kiss on the cheek. I'm too old for any kind of kiss. ' My Dad looked at me for the longest time, and his eyes started to tear up. 'You're right, ' he said. 'You are a big boy…a man. I won't kiss you anymore. '

Paragraph 2:

Frank got a funny look on his face, and the tears began to well up in his eyes. And he spoke. 'It wasn't long after that when my Dad went to sea and never came back. It was a bad weather day when most of the fishermen stayed in, but not Dad. He had a big family to feed. The ocean has swallowed him up.'

【解析】

這是一篇讀后續(xù)寫。文章講述了一個(gè)故事。董事會(huì)結(jié)束時(shí)Bob不小心打翻了咖啡，他覺得很尷尬。后來，大家都開始講述自己記憶中最尷尬的場景。

續(xù)寫分為兩部分。第一部分的開頭是：那是我第一次用那樣的方式和他講話，他臉上出現(xiàn)了驚訝的表情……所以可以接著寫：我說：“爸爸，我已經(jīng)足夠大，不要在我臉頰上吻別了！那已經(jīng)不適合我了。”父親看著我，眼睛里涌出了淚水。他說：“你是對(duì)的。你現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)是個(gè)大男孩了，不，你已經(jīng)是個(gè)男子漢了，我以后不會(huì)在親吻你了。”

第二段的開頭是：弗蘭克臉上出現(xiàn)了一個(gè)滑稽的表情，然后淚水模糊了他的雙眼……所以可以接著寫：他接著說：“在那之后不久，我爸爸去出海就再也沒有回來過了。那天的天氣不好，所有的漁人都待在家，除了我的父親，因?yàn)樗�有一大家要養(yǎng)。海洋吞沒了他�！�

續(xù)寫是要注意所寫內(nèi)容要符合故事邏輯，基礎(chǔ)時(shí)態(tài)是一般過去時(shí)，但直接引語要根據(jù)具體情況來判斷。