Question

【題目】假設(shè)你校即將召開藝術(shù)節(jié)，作為學(xué)校電影社團(tuán)的團(tuán)長(zhǎng)，你將在藝術(shù)節(jié)開幕式上介紹一部電影，寫一份發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容包括：

1.你介紹的電影名稱及內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介；

2.你為什么要選擇介紹這部電影。

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Answer 1

【答案】Today, I'd like to introduce a movie that left a deep impression on me—The climbers, starring Wu Jing and Zhang Ziyi. As a film dedicated to the 70th birthday of our motherland, it's excellent both in the plot and in the shooting effect.

The film tells the story of a group of Chinese mountaineers who overcame lots of difficulties to climb mount Everest three times for the honor of our country. I was amazed at the enormity of mount Everest, but I was even more impressed by the climbers' courage and determination to conquer nature. Of course, what moved me most was their patriotism.

In view of the points above, I recommend this film to you, and I think it is worth watching more than once

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)是提綱類作文，要求介紹一部電影。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本文要求介紹一部電影：假設(shè)你校即將召開藝術(shù)節(jié)，作為學(xué)校電影社團(tuán)的團(tuán)長(zhǎng)，你將在藝術(shù)節(jié)開幕式上介紹一部電影，寫一份發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.你介紹的電影名稱及內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介；2.你為什么要選擇介紹這部電影。時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如； star（由……主演），plot（劇情），shooting effect（拍攝效果），enormity（巍峨），determination（決心）， patriotism（愛國精神）及recommend（推薦）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持卷面的整潔美觀。