Question

【題目】仔細(xì)觀察下面這幅漫畫，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇150左右的短文，就“抓住機(jī)會(huì)，取得成功”這個(gè)話題，發(fā)表你的看法。

Seizing an opportunity is the first and most important step towards success.

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Answer 1

【答案】Seizing an opportunity is the first and most important step towards success. We often hear someone complaining that they can’t succeed because of lack of opportunities just like the two hunters in the picture. While they are arguing about the best way to cook a swan if they catch one, a swan is flying over the head of them. Obviously, they will miss this swan if they keep arguing instead of shooting it.

This picture reminds me of some people in real life who always think about what they will gain if they have an opportunity to do a particular thing. While they are imagining, opportunities are passing by them. The opportunity is an important factor contributing to one’s success. However, it only smiles on those who have great intelligence and are well prepared for it.

Therefore, if we want to achieve success, what we should do is get well prepared to take advantage of good opportunities and once a chance appears / comes along , we should try our best to seize it without hesitation. (164 words)

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖畫作文，要求根據(jù)漫畫寫一篇議論文。

這是一篇于圖畫作文。根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)提示可知，本文為議論文，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

第一步，認(rèn)真讀圖，把握中心，確定圖畫的關(guān)鍵詞，比如hunter（獵人），swan（天鵝），argue(爭(zhēng)論)等；

第二步，根據(jù)關(guān)鍵詞，簡(jiǎn)要描述圖畫內(nèi)容，可以用下這些句子開頭:In the picture above ，we can see...; As we can see in the picture...; From the picture, we can see that...; 或者It can be seen/concluded from the picture that...；

第三步，描述這幅圖畫表達(dá)出的意義，該部分是作文的重點(diǎn)；

第四步，總結(jié)，該圖畫的意義。

為了提高文章檔次，考生應(yīng)在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)齊全的同時(shí)進(jìn)行合理而又緊扣主題的發(fā)揮。該類型的書面表達(dá)具有一定的靈活性，能較好地體現(xiàn)考生的英語(yǔ)思維能力�？忌�還需要注意句子間的正確聯(lián)系，注意詞語(yǔ)的豐富和句型的多樣。