Question

【題目】假如你是李華，近日目睹了一次嚴重的交通事故：一名小男孩因闖紅燈被車撞受傷。此事引發(fā)了你對交通安全的思考。請根據(jù)以下要點給校英語報社投稿。

1.存在的問題；

2.造成的后果；

3.提出建議。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear editor:

I’m Li Hua, a senior school student. I want to say something about the traffic problems. Recently, I witnessed that a boy ran the red light and was injured by a speedy car. What a pity!

I noticed that more and more traffic accidents happened on the road, most of which resulted from people’s breaking the traffic rules, such as disobeying traffic signals and moving on regardless of speed limits. When accidents happen, what we lose is not only time and money but health or even our lives. The problem of traffic safety is an urgent on because it concerns the safety of all of us.

So the government should carry out effective management of the traffic systems and everyone should raise the awareness of traffic safety and strictly obey the traffic rules.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本題考查提綱類作文。首先審題，假如你是李華，近日目睹了一次嚴重的交通事故：一名小男孩因闖紅燈被車撞受傷。此事引發(fā)了你對交通安全的思考。請根據(jù)以下要點給校英語報社投稿。1.存在的問題；2.造成的后果；3.提出建議。在寫作過程中，上下文意思要連貫，符合邏輯關系，一定要契合題目所給出的信息，不要出現(xiàn)偏題問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有文采。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了一些高級句型。例如Recently, I witnessed that a boy ran the red light and was injured by a speedy car.這里含有一個賓語從句。I noticed that more and more traffic accidents happened on the road, most of which resulted from people’s breaking the traffic rules, such as disobeying traffic signals and moving on regardless of speed limits.這里含有一個賓語從句和一個非限制性定語從句。