【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加： 在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧）,并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除： 把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改： 在錯(cuò)詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

I will share one experience with you. With the college Entrance Examination draw near, I was filled with great anxiety. However, I couldn’t be absorbed in study, resulting from my failing in the examination. I got very discouraging. Just then ,my teacher, Miss Zhang, approached me and said,“In life we all have moments when we can’t achieve what we want to. It is natural. Don’t allow those moments to weaken you, and turn them into motivation to inspire yourself.” Her words were reminder that provided me with constant encouragement to smile at life. Consequently , I gained that I deserved.

So it is an optimistic attitude what matters most of all. It gives you the confidence to deal with difficulties and to achieve what you want in your life.

【答案】

【1】draw改為drawing

【2】However改為T(mén)herefore

【3】from改為in

【4】discouraging改為discouraged

【5】刪除want后to

【6】and改為but

【7】yourself改為you

【8】were后加a

【9】that改為what

【10】what改為that

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于記敘文，隨著高考臨近，我變得很焦慮，導(dǎo)致我多次考試失敗。最后是在張老師的幫助下，我認(rèn)識(shí)到我們要把壓力轉(zhuǎn)換成動(dòng)力，戰(zhàn)勝生活中的壓力。

【1】draw改為drawing 考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。本句是介詞with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，其中with的賓語(yǔ)the college Entrance Examination與動(dòng)詞draw構(gòu)成主動(dòng)關(guān)系，所以使用現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)在句中做賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)。句意：隨著高考臨近，我心中充滿了焦慮。

【2】However改為T(mén)herefore 考查副詞。正是因?yàn)槲液芙箲]，所以我才無(wú)法集中注意力于學(xué)習(xí)，導(dǎo)致我在考試中失敗。上下文之間是因果關(guān)系，所以使用副詞therefore表示因果關(guān)系。

【3】from改為in 考查動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)。短語(yǔ)result in導(dǎo)致；result from因?yàn)�，由于；正是因�(yàn)槲液芙箲]，所以我才無(wú)法集中注意力于學(xué)習(xí)，導(dǎo)致我在考試中失敗。根據(jù)句意可知應(yīng)該使用短語(yǔ)result in“導(dǎo)致”。

【4】discouraging改為discouraged 考查形容詞。形容詞discouraged感到泄氣的；該詞通常修飾人；形容詞discouraging令人失望的，該詞經(jīng)常修飾事物。本句中使用discouraged修飾主語(yǔ)I。

【5】刪除want后to 考查句子成分。賓語(yǔ)從句what we want中what作為動(dòng)詞want的賓語(yǔ)，原句中的to是多余的。句意：在生活中，我們都會(huì)遇見(jiàn)我們無(wú)法實(shí)現(xiàn)自己想要實(shí)現(xiàn)的事情的時(shí)候。

【6】and改為but 考查連詞。句意：不要讓這些消極時(shí)刻削弱我們，而是要把它們當(dāng)成激勵(lì)自己的動(dòng)機(jī)。上下文之間為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，所以使用but表示轉(zhuǎn)折。

【7】yourself改為you 考查代詞。本句中賓格you作為動(dòng)詞inspire的賓語(yǔ)。句意：不要讓這些消極時(shí)刻削弱我們，而是要把它們當(dāng)成激勵(lì)自己的動(dòng)機(jī)。不需要使用反身代詞yourself“你自己”做賓語(yǔ)。

【8】were后加a 考查冠詞。本句中名詞“reminder提醒物，提示物”是一個(gè)可數(shù)名詞，前面加a表示泛指“一件提醒事物”。句意：他的話是一個(gè)提醒，給了我不斷的鼓勵(lì)讓我微笑面對(duì)生活。

【9】that改為what 考查賓語(yǔ)從句。本句中what引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句，并在句中作為動(dòng)詞deserve的賓語(yǔ)。

【10】what改為that 考查定語(yǔ)從句。本題定語(yǔ)從句的先行詞是an optimistic attitude，關(guān)系代詞that指代先行詞在句中做主語(yǔ)，不能省略。

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