【題目】閱讀下面短文,然后按要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

Recently many universities have used the school beauty and a handsome boy as a way of advertising to attract new students.

Web celebrity Zhang Zetian, who is popularly known by her online nickname 'Milk Tea Sister' appeared on the cover page of Tsinghua University's magazine, along with other famous people in the university in 2012.

Renmin University, a top university in Beijing featured graduation photos of a beautiful girl, Kang Yikun in 2013 in its website's homepage. The photo won praise from netizens who said it showed the atmosphere of the graduation season in a creative way.

Famous school beauties and handsome boys also appeared in Wuhan University, Northwest University, Beijing Language and Culture University and many other schools.

Some approve of this way of advertising. A young writer, Zhang Lechen, who was born in the 1980s, said this promotional method was creative and had a strong visual impact and as a result was a much more effective way to communicate.

However, others argue against the method, saying that it is not a good way for the university to use attractive girls or boys to make advertisements.

[寫作內(nèi)容]

1.以約30個(gè)詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。

2.以約120個(gè)詞就大學(xué)招生這個(gè)話題談?wù)勀愕目捶,?nèi)容包括:

(1)你對大學(xué)利用美女、帥哥打招生廣告的看法;

(2)你會根據(jù)大學(xué)哪些條件來決定報(bào)讀;

(3)你希望在大學(xué)結(jié)識什么樣的人。

[寫作要求]

1.作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事,也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

[評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]

概括準(zhǔn)確,語言規(guī)范,內(nèi)容合適,語篇連貫。

【答案】

【解析】

試題分析:本篇讀寫任務(wù)要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文,首先要用大約30個(gè)詞概括所給文章的大概內(nèi)容,然后用大約120個(gè)詞談?wù)剬?/span>大學(xué)招生的看法,包括如下要點(diǎn):(1)你對大學(xué)利用美女、帥哥打招生廣告的看法;(2)你會根據(jù)大學(xué)哪些條件來決定報(bào)讀;(3)你希望在大學(xué)結(jié)識什么樣的人。因?yàn)閷儆谡撜f性文章,所以在謀篇布局時(shí)可以考慮三段式的寫作模式。而且還可以使用事例來論證自己的觀點(diǎn),增強(qiáng)文章的說服力。也可以使用文章所給內(nèi)容但是不能照抄原文句子。在論述時(shí)還要使用過渡句和連接詞來使文章內(nèi)容具有層次性和邏輯性。此外寫作時(shí)要盡量使用高級詞匯和多種句式結(jié)構(gòu),比如定語從句,強(qiáng)調(diào)句型等等以增加文章亮點(diǎn)。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】在本篇范文中作者開頭用三句話大約30個(gè)字概括了所給文章的內(nèi)容,然后用Different people have different attitudes towards it. Some are for it while others are against it.作為過渡,來進(jìn)行對自己看法的講述。這種段落安排符合論述文的要求,而且使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,層次分明。在語言方面作者使用了大量的復(fù)

合句和短語結(jié)構(gòu),顯示了作者對語言結(jié)構(gòu)的把握,同時(shí)增加了文章的采分點(diǎn)。比如for one thing ,for another thing ;非謂語短語causing some of us to pay too much attention to peoples outer appearance rather than their inner beauty.等。

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