Question

【題目】目前你們市正在開展騎電動自行車必須戴頭盔行動。假如你是高中學生李華，你打算給你 校英文報投稿，呼吁同學們響應這項行動，內容包括：

1.電動自行車為何是人們日常生活中最常見且最適用的交通工具；

2.為何要開展該項行動；

3.你的呼吁……

注意：1 .詞數(shù)100左右，可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫；

2.參考詞匯：減輕mitigate。

Dear Fellow Students,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Fellow Students,

At present our city is carrying out a campaign, the content of which is that anyone who is riding an electric bike must wear a helmet. The purpose of the campaign is to mitigate the consequence of such a traffic accident and reduce the death rate in an accident.

As we all know, the electric bike is the most commonly used and the most practical traffic tool for most people in their life. Generally, it is small in size, convenient and fast. Besides, it doesn’t cost much money to use it in our life and work.

According to the traffic regulation, one riding an electric bike but without wearing a helmet is to be warned or is to pay a fine of more than 50 yuan but less than 100 yuan.

My appeal is that all our students riding electric bikes should wear helmets for the safety of themselves and other people. After all, life is more precious than any other thing.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求以李華的身份給校英文報投稿，呼吁同學們響應正在開展騎電動自行車必須戴頭盔的行動。

第一步：審題

體裁：應用文。

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時。

結構：總分法。

要求：

1.電動自行車為何是人們日常生活中最常見且最適用的交通工具；

2.為何要開展該項行動；

3.你的呼吁……

第二步：列提綱（重點短語）

is carrying out ；The purpose of；the most commonly used；to be warned；My appeal

第三步：連詞成句

1.The purpose of the campaign is to mitigate the consequence of such a traffic accident and reduce the death rate in an accident.

2.As we all know, the electric bike is the most commonly used and the most practical traffic tool for most people in their life.

3.According to the traffic regulation, one riding an electric bike but without wearing a helmet is to be warned or is to pay a fine of more than 50 Yuan but less than 100 Yuan.

4.My appeal is that all our students riding electric bikes should wear helmets for the safety of themselves and other people.

根據(jù)提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇

1.表示文章結構順序：提出活動內容；表明活動目的；表明自己觀點。

2.表示并列補充關系：As we all know；Generally；Besides；My appeal；After all

第五步：潤色修改