Question

【題目】每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞；只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

As is known to all that millions of graduates crowded into the job market each year. But because the financial crisis, the situation of the employment has become very serious. Consider this, some people suggest graduates should have a lower career expectation, such as working in the western area of China. I in favor of this idea. Firstly, compared with the big cities, the competition is not as fierce there, but graduates can easy get a job. Secondly, the lower position may offer graduate more space. All in all, going to the west may be bring more benefits. Devote yourself to the west, for it is both good for our personal development and for our country at present.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】As→ It

【2】crowded→ crowd

【3】because后加of

【4】Consider → Considering

【5】I后加am

【6】but → so

【7】easy→ easily

【8】graduate→ graduates

【9】be去掉

【10】our →your

【解析】

試題分析：每年會有大量的畢業(yè)生涌入就業(yè)市場，但是由于經(jīng)濟危機的發(fā)生，就業(yè)狀況變得非常嚴峻�？紤]到這個方面，很多人建議畢業(yè)生應該有一個較低的工作要求和預期，比如考慮去中國西北部就業(yè)等。

【1】As→ It 考查代詞。從結(jié)構(gòu)可知that從句是真正的主語，故用it做形式主語，把As改為It。

【2】crowded→ crowd 考查動詞時態(tài)。從句中each year可知句子應該用一般現(xiàn)在時，把crowded改為crowd。

【3】because后加of 考查介詞。Because后面跟從句，because of 后面跟名詞，在becaue后加of。

【4】Consider → Considering 考查介詞。此處是considering引導的介詞短語做狀語，consider 是動詞，只做謂語，故把consider改為considering。

【5】I后加am 考查謂語動詞。該句中缺少謂語，固定短語：be fond of “喜歡”，在I后加am。

【6】but → so 考查連詞。根據(jù)前后句內(nèi)容可知此處是因果關系，故把but改為so。

【7】easy→ easily 考查副詞。修飾動詞應該用副詞形式，把easy改為easily。

【8】graduate→ graduates 考查名詞。Graduate是可數(shù)名詞，此處是泛指概念，應該用復數(shù)形式，把graduate改為graduates。

【9】去掉be 考查謂語動詞。行為動詞bring不和系動詞連用，故去掉be。

【10】our →your 考查代詞。根據(jù)前句內(nèi)容yourself可知此處需把our改為your。