【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加,刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧),并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意:1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Sandy arrived at the museum at last. She was so tired that she has to find a chair to sit on. If she sat down, she noticed nice painting on the wall. She stared with it for a long time--- such long, that she fell asleep.

Suddenly, she felt a tap on his shoulder. She looked up and saw a man on a horse wear a metal suit. He was only a sculpture a moment ago, but by now he was alive and talking to Sandy! She was so frightening that she ran down the hall.

From around the corner she could hear someone singing. She went to see what it was but there was nobody in sight.

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【解析】本文是一篇記敘短文。講述了Sandy進(jìn)入博物館后坐在椅子上睡著了,發(fā)現(xiàn)有人在拍她,她就看到博物館的雕像變成了活人和她說(shuō)話,她嚇著跑出去,等再回去看時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)并沒(méi)有人在那兒。

“She was so tired that she has to find a chair to sit on”,根據(jù)was,可知此句為過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài),前后時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)保持一致。故將has改為had。

2.“If she sat down, she noticed nice painting on the wall”聯(lián)系前后句,此處應(yīng)該引領(lǐng)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。故將If改為Once或者When或者After。

3. she noticed nice painting on the wall.根據(jù)painting用的是單數(shù)可知,此處指的是墻上的一幅畫(huà)。故添加a。

4.“ She stared with it for a long time”,“stare at盯著,凝視,固定用法,沒(méi)有“stare with”這個(gè)短語(yǔ)。故將with改為at。

5.“ such long”,so用來(lái)修飾形容詞或副詞,such用來(lái)修飾名詞,此句中long為形容詞。故將such改為so。

6.“she felt a tap on his shoulder”,由前文可看出Sandy是女生,hishe的物主代詞,hershe的物主代詞。故將his改為her。

7.“She looked up and saw a man on a horse wear a metal suit”, wear a horse是主動(dòng)的關(guān)系,所以用現(xiàn)在分詞作定語(yǔ)也可以把a man on a horse wear a metal suit是作動(dòng)詞saw的賓語(yǔ)從句,由語(yǔ)境可知用一般過(guò)去時(shí);故將wear改為wearingwore。

8.“but by now he was alive and talking to Sandy”,“by now到目前為止,現(xiàn)如今,一般會(huì)和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)連用。此處強(qiáng)調(diào)的是現(xiàn)在,應(yīng)該用now。故刪去by。

9.“She was so frightening that she ran down the hall”,“frightening令人懼怕的主要用于修飾物,“frightened害怕的主要用于修飾人。故將frightening改為frightened。

10.“She went to see what it was but there was nobody in sight”,根據(jù)nobody可知,此處和人物有關(guān),她想去看看它是誰(shuí)而不是它是什么。故將what改為who。

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