【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（∧ )，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\ )劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線（一），并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Last Friday, we went to Beijing Survival Island to go on an outing, that left us with a deep impression.

Early in the morning, we gathered the school gate and the school bus takes us there. In the way, we talked and laughed, full of excitement. Upon arrive, we were attracted by various activities and got involved immediate. The monkey bars were really challenging. One of the boys managed to make it with the encouragement of her classmates. I was interested in making cakes. I was being taught to make my first cake on my own! At lunchtime, we sat around, enjoying the delicious food. Everyone had the good time.

We really enjoyed our stay there. Before we left, we had a photo taken to record the unforgettable days.

【答案】that left us ... that 改成 which

gathered the school gate ... gathered后加at

the school bus takes ... takes 改成 took

In the way ... In 改成 On

Upon arrive ... arrive 改成 arrival / arriving

got involved immediate. immediate 改成 immediately

her classmates. her 改成 his

I was being taught ... 去掉being

had the good time. the 改成 a

unforgettable days. days 改成 day

【解析】

本文是一篇記敘文，講述了上周五我們到北京無人島上游玩的一次經(jīng)歷。

第一處：考查定語從句。這個(gè)定語從句的先行詞是an outing，關(guān)系代詞which指代先行詞，引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，在句中做主語。

第二處：考查介詞。本句中動(dòng)詞gather意為“聚集”，是一個(gè)不及物動(dòng)詞，后面不能直接加賓語，需要添加介詞at。句意：上午的早些時(shí)候，我們在校門口集中。

第三處：考查時(shí)態(tài)。本文講述的是上個(gè)星期五發(fā)生的事情，全文都是一般過去時(shí)，所以本句使用過去式took。

第四處：考查固定短語。短語on the way在路上；in the way妨礙；句意：在路上，我們說啊，笑啊，非常興奮。

第五處：考查賓語。在英語在，介詞的后面要接名詞或動(dòng)名詞做賓語，本句中arrive是動(dòng)詞，所以使用動(dòng)名詞arriving或名詞arrival做賓語。

第六處：考查副詞。在英語中副詞通常做狀語修飾形容詞、副詞、動(dòng)詞或整個(gè)句子。本句中副詞immediately做狀語修飾動(dòng)詞短語got involved。

第七處：考查代詞。本句的主語是One of the boys，是男性，所以使用his指代，而her指代女性。

第八處：考查語態(tài)。本句并沒有強(qiáng)調(diào)過去正在進(jìn)行的事情，所以不需要使用過去進(jìn)行時(shí)。句意：我被教第一處自己做蛋糕。

第九處：考查固定句式。句式have a good time玩得開心。

第十處：考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。根據(jù)第一段可知本文介紹上周五發(fā)生的事情，上周五我們度過了令人難忘的一天。不可能使用復(fù)數(shù)形式days。

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