【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定在英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文。請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤, 每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2．只允許修改l0處，從第11處起不計(jì)分。（題見答題卡）

There are many advantage of smiling. It can not only make us happy, but also please others. If we smile to life, life will smile to us on return. So I want to smile at all whenever and wherever possibly.

First, I would like to smile to my parents because you have given me life and taken the trouble to bringing me up. They arrange almost everything for me. I love my parents, with their help I have made a great progress. I will like to say “Thank you” to them with a smile. Then my smile should go to myself, but for only in this way can I gain more confidence in smiling my difficulties away and lived a better life.

【答案】

【1】advantage改為advantages

【2】on turn改為in

【3】possibly改為possible

【4】you改為they

【5】bringing改為bring

【6】their改為whose

【7】刪除a

【8】will改為would

【9】刪除but

【10】lived改為live

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于說明文閱讀，主要介紹了生活中微笑的巨大作用。

【1】advantage改為advantages 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。名詞advantage優(yōu)點(diǎn)，好處，這是一個(gè)可數(shù)名詞，前面有many修飾，說明應(yīng)該使用復(fù)數(shù)形式。

【2】on turn改為in 考查介詞短語。短語in return作為回報(bào)；句意：如果我們對(duì)生活微笑，作為回報(bào)，生活也會(huì)對(duì)我們微笑。

【3】possibly改為possible 考查形容詞。本句是一個(gè)省略句，在wherever后面省略了it is，所以本句中使用possible與is構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)。句意：無論何時(shí)何地，只要可能，我們想對(duì)所有人微笑。

【4】you改為they 考查代詞。本句中動(dòng)詞they指代my parents。句意：首先，我想對(duì)父母微笑，因?yàn)樗麄兘o了我生命。

【5】bringing改為bring 考查動(dòng)詞原形。動(dòng)詞短語take the trouble to do sth不辭辛勞做某事；父母親給了我生命并不辭辛勞地?fù)狃B(yǎng)我長大。

【6】their改為whose 考查定語從句。本題定語從句的先行詞是my parents，定語從句中使用關(guān)系代詞whose做定語修飾名詞help，whose help一起作為介詞with的賓語。

【7】刪除a 考查不定冠詞。本句中的名詞“progress進(jìn)步”是一個(gè)不可數(shù)名詞，不能用a修飾，該詞動(dòng)詞短語make progress取得進(jìn)步。

【8】will改為would 考查固定結(jié)構(gòu)。短語would like to do sth想要做某事。句意：我想微笑著對(duì)他們說：謝謝你們。

【9】刪除but 考查連詞。本句中使用連詞for，引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句，起補(bǔ)充說明的作用。所以表轉(zhuǎn)折的連詞but是多余的。句意：接著我要對(duì)自己微笑，因?yàn)橹挥羞@樣我才可以得到更多的自信。

【10】lived改為live 考查謂語動(dòng)詞。本句中動(dòng)詞live a better life與gain more confidence之間是并列關(guān)系，都使用動(dòng)詞原形和情態(tài)動(dòng)詞can一起構(gòu)成謂語部分。

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