【題目】某中學生英語報社擬成立微笑俱樂部,現(xiàn)征募會員。要求申請者提交一篇題為“I Want To Smile”的英語短文。請依據(jù)下面提示用英語寫一篇短文。

內(nèi)容要點:

1.微笑的優(yōu)點。

2.想對其微笑的人物(父母)以及理由。

3.對自己微笑的理由。

注意:1. 詞數(shù)100左右。

2. 短文必須包含全部的內(nèi)容要點。要求觀點明確,結構合理,行文連貫。

I Want To Smile

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【答案】I want to smile

There are many advantages of smiling. It can not only make us happy, but also please others. If we smile at life, life will smile on us in return. So I want to smile at all whenever and wherever possible

First, I would like to smile at my parents because they have given me life and take all the trouble to bring me up. They arrange almost everything for me. With their help, I have made great progress. I would like to say “Thank you” to them with a smile. Then my smile should go to myself, for only in this way can I gain more confidence in smiling my troubles away and live a better life.
In a word, let’s greet every day with a smile. Tomorrow is another day.

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較簡略,故動筆前要認真閱讀材料,組織寫作內(nèi)容,不可遺漏要點,并適當發(fā)揮。寫作中注意從三個方面進行敘述,首先介紹微笑的優(yōu)點,然后介紹想對其微笑的人物(父母)以及理由,最后介紹對自己微笑的理由。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關系。該題型主要考查學生的語言表達能力,在寫作中根據(jù)所給提示和語言信息,不遺漏要點,可以適當發(fā)揮。做到表達清楚,語法正確,上下文連貫。

亮點說明:范文使用了一些重要的語法知識:條件狀語從句If we smile at life…;狀語從句的省略…whenever and wherever possible;原因狀語從句…because they have given me life and take all the trouble to bring me up.;倒裝句式…only in this way can I gain more confidence in smiling my troubles away and live a better life.等,語法知識使用得當,敘事清晰;同時范文還使用了很多固定短語not only…but also…;in return;bring me up;made great progress;In a word等,使作文內(nèi)容更加充實;范文注意使用so,F(xiàn)irst,Then,In a wordA等來銜接句子和段落,表示事情發(fā)生的時間順序,使作文更有條理,做到了行文連貫,表達更加生動。

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