【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)您修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（ ∧ ），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜錢(qián)（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只充許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

I’m Wang Lin. I’m a senior 3 student who take the College Entrance Exam soon. Now I have a problem in choosing my major. My parents want me to study international business. Therefore, my head teacher suggests that I chose software engineering. As for me, I have a total different idea from them. I want to take environmental science for my major so that I can use that I have learned to help improving the environment in my hometown after the graduation. But can I possibly make a decision on my own against the will of my parents and my teacher? I’m writing to you for my opinion. Would you please spare some time to give me some advices?

【答案】

【1】who后面加will

【2】Therefore改為However

【3】chose改為choose

【4】total改為totally

【5】for改為as

【6】that改為what或在that前加all

【7】improving改為improve

【8】去掉after后the

【9】my改為your

【10】advices改為advice

【解析】

【1】who后面加will 考查時(shí)態(tài)。這個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)是soon，這是一個(gè)將來(lái)時(shí)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)，所以定語(yǔ)從句中使用將來(lái)時(shí)。句義：我是一名很快要參加高考的高三學(xué)生。

【2】Therefore改為However 考查連詞。句意：我的父母親想要我學(xué)習(xí)國(guó)際貿(mào)易，然而我的班主任建議我選擇軟件工程。根據(jù)上下文句意可知表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，所以使用however表示轉(zhuǎn)折。

【3】chose改為choose 考查suggest用法。當(dāng)suggest表示“建議”的時(shí)候，后面賓語(yǔ)從句要使用虛擬語(yǔ)氣“should+動(dòng)詞原形”，其中的should可以省略。所以本句中choose前面省略了should。

【4】total改為totally 考查副詞。在英語(yǔ)中通常使用副詞充當(dāng)狀語(yǔ)來(lái)修飾形容詞、動(dòng)詞。本句中使用totally修飾形容詞different。

【5】for改為as 考查介詞。短語(yǔ)take sth as....把...當(dāng)成...；句意：我想把環(huán)�？茖W(xué)當(dāng)成我的專業(yè)，以便于我可以用我所學(xué)的來(lái)幫助改善家鄉(xiāng)的環(huán)境。

【6】that改為what或在that前加all 考查定語(yǔ)從句或者賓語(yǔ)從句。把that改成what的時(shí)候，what引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句what I have learned充當(dāng)動(dòng)詞use的賓語(yǔ)。在that前面加all時(shí)，all就是先行詞，that充當(dāng)關(guān)系代詞指代all在定語(yǔ)從句中做動(dòng)詞learn的賓語(yǔ)。

【7】improving改為improve 考查固定搭配。短語(yǔ)help (to) do sth幫助做某事；句意：我想把環(huán)�？茖W(xué)當(dāng)成我的專業(yè)，以便于我可以用我所學(xué)的來(lái)幫助改善家鄉(xiāng)的環(huán)境。

【8】去掉after后the 考查冠詞。名詞graduation畢業(yè)，這是一個(gè)抽象名詞，通常單獨(dú)使用，不需要定冠詞修飾。

【9】for后my改為your 考查代詞。句意：我寫(xiě)信給你征求你的意見(jiàn)。本句中的your指代寫(xiě)信的對(duì)象。

【10】advices改為advice 考查名詞。名詞advice“建議”是一個(gè)不可數(shù)名詞，沒(méi)有復(fù)數(shù)形式。

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