【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Dear David,

I’m Wang Lin, a middle school student from Beijing, China. Learned from the Internet that you will set up a photography club, I’d like to join it.

As the outgoing young man, I enjoy the beauty and harmony of nature and I’m crazy with photography. I used my camera to lake as many pictures as possibly whenever there is a chance. By practicing a lot, I have mastered some skills and have won quite a few prize in photography competitions. Joining the club, so I’ll share my photography experience with another members. In this way, my skills will be greatly improved. In addition, I expect to make much more friends in the club, with which I can take pictures together in our spare time.

Please consider my request, and I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Wang Lin

【答案】

【解析】本文是一篇書信類閱讀。本文主要講了作者申請加入攝影俱樂部。

考查非謂語動詞。learn與其邏輯主語I之間是主動關(guān)系，所以用現(xiàn)在分詞，Learned改成 Learning。

考查冠詞。泛指“一個(gè)外向的年輕人”，且outgoing的首字母發(fā)音是元音，所以用不定冠詞an，the改成an。

考查固定短語。這里表示“我對攝影非常著迷”，be crazy about著迷于；狂熱愛好…，是固定短語，所以with改成about。

考查時(shí)態(tài)。表示經(jīng)�；蚍磸�(fù)發(fā)生的動作，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，所以used改成use。

考查固定用法。as…as possible盡可能，是固定用法，所以possibly改成possible。

考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。a few修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)，所以prize改成prizes。

考查非謂語動詞。“我”與“加入”之間是主動關(guān)系，Joining the club是現(xiàn)在分詞用作原因狀語，所以刪掉so。

考查形容詞。加入這個(gè)俱樂部，我就可以和其他的會員分享我的攝影經(jīng)歷。表示“其他的”，所以another改成other。

考查many的用法。修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)friends，用many，所以much改成many。

考查介詞+關(guān)系代詞引導(dǎo)的定語從句。with whom I can take pictures together in our spare time.是一個(gè)非限制性定語從句，介詞 + 關(guān)系代詞引導(dǎo)的定語從句，指人，只能用whom。

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