分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟:1. 認真審題,找準提示語中的關鍵詞或句,確定中心思想.2. 依據(jù)關鍵句,草擬提綱,梳理文章的脈絡3. 準確定位人稱、時態(tài).注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次.4.最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況,有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一:
Contrary to the common reaction when their cars get scratched,Xue displayed a high degree of tolerance and compassion,which contribute to the harmony of the story
與通常的反應相反的,他們的車被抓了,薛顯示出高程度的寬容和同情,這有助于故事的和諧.
高分句型二:
Despite the difference in wealth,the inferior should always put honesty in the first place,and those who enjoy a better life should show more empathy with the inferior.
盡管貧富差異,自卑者應該始終把誠實放在第一位,而過上好生活的人應該表現(xiàn)出更多的同情和自卑.
解答 One possible version:
Chen Yifan and his mom decided to pay all they could afford for compensation after Chen accidentally bumped into a parked BMW.Moved by his deed,the car owner declined and offered to sponsor Chen's education.
Chen has really set a good example to our fellow Chinese students.Though he could have left the scene unpunished,he decided to shoulder the cost of repairs.Meanwhile,that car driver Xue didn't pale in comparison with the boy.Contrary to the common reaction when their cars get scratched,Xue displayed a high degree of tolerance and compassion,which contribute to the harmony of the story(高分句型一).
As far as I am concerned,such harmonious relationship between them shows great advances in social morality.Despite the difference in wealth,the inferior should always put honesty in the first place,and those who enjoy a better life should show more empathy with the inferior(高分句型二).
點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題,并此為基礎進行思維和聯(lián)想,自由發(fā)揮.不僅考查學生在內容、結構安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力,而且對學生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求.
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