17.Chen Yifan,the student from a local senior high school,hit a BMW car parking along the street when he was passing by on a bicycle on February 4,leaving the rearview mirror broken and several scratches over the body of the car.
Chen left a letter of apology to the car owner,together with an envelope of 311 yuan he had earned from part-time jobs during the winter holiday.He put them at the inside of a door handle.
The car owner surnamed Xue found the letter and cash the next day and got so touched by Chen's honesty.With the help of local police Xue located the student on February 10 in the hope of returning the money.He told the police that he also wants to fund Chen's education if the family cannot afford it.
On February 11,Chen's mother,after knowing what her son had done,voluntarily contacted Xue trying to compensate for the repair of 13,000 yuan.But Xue turned her down firmly.
The next day,Xue's daughter visited Chen's family with a grant of 10,000 yuan for his education.
【寫作內容】
1.用約30個單詞寫出上文概要;
2.用約120個單詞發(fā)表你的觀點,內容包括:
(1)如果你是那位中學生,你會怎么做?你又如何看待這位車主的行為?
(2)如何理解"窮有信、富而仁"這句話?
【寫作要求】
1.寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句;
2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱;
3.不必寫標題.
【評分標準】
內容完整,語言規(guī)范,語篇連貫,詞數(shù)適當.
Chen Yifan and his mom decided to pay all they could afford for compensation after Chen accidentally bumped into a parked BMW.Moved by his deed,the car owner declined and offered to sponsor Chen's education.
Chen has really set a good example to our fellow Chinese students.Though he could have left the scene unpunished,he decided to shoulder the cost of repairs.Meanwhile,that car driver Xue didn't pale in comparison with the boy.Contrary to the common reaction when their cars get scratched,Xue displayed a high degree of tolerance and compassion,which contribute to the harmony of the story.
As far as I am concerned,such harmonious relationship between them shows great advances in social morality.Despite the difference in wealth,the inferior should always put honesty in the first place,and those who enjoy a better life should show more empathy with the inferior..

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟:1. 認真審題,找準提示語中的關鍵詞或句,確定中心思想.2. 依據(jù)關鍵句,草擬提綱,梳理文章的脈絡3. 準確定位人稱、時態(tài).注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次.4.最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況,有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一:
Contrary to the common reaction when their cars get scratched,Xue displayed a high degree of tolerance and compassion,which contribute to the harmony of the story
與通常的反應相反的,他們的車被抓了,薛顯示出高程度的寬容和同情,這有助于故事的和諧.
高分句型二:
Despite the difference in wealth,the inferior should always put honesty in the first place,and those who enjoy a better life should show more empathy with the inferior.
盡管貧富差異,自卑者應該始終把誠實放在第一位,而過上好生活的人應該表現(xiàn)出更多的同情和自卑.

解答 One possible version:
Chen Yifan and his mom decided to pay all they could afford for compensation after Chen accidentally bumped into a parked BMW.Moved by his deed,the car owner declined and offered to sponsor Chen's education.
Chen has really set a good example to our fellow Chinese students.Though he could have left the scene unpunished,he decided to shoulder the cost of repairs.Meanwhile,that car driver Xue didn't pale in comparison with the boy.Contrary to the common reaction when their cars get scratched,Xue displayed a high degree of tolerance and compassion,which contribute to the harmony of the story(高分句型一).
As far as I am concerned,such harmonious relationship between them shows great advances in social morality.Despite the difference in wealth,the inferior should always put honesty in the first place,and those who enjoy a better life should show more empathy with the inferior(高分句型二).

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題,并此為基礎進行思維和聯(lián)想,自由發(fā)揮.不僅考查學生在內容、結構安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力,而且對學生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求.

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C.The author bought a card to go with the purse.
D.The Agins charged so little money for the purse.
48.Sylvia Agins'behavior shows thatB.
A.she is good at making money    
B.she is kind and thoughtful
C.she knows how to choose presents
D.she is critical and mean
49.Which of the following can be the best title for the text?C
A.An Unforgettable Event  
B.A Considerate Mother
C.A Priceless Mother's Day GiftD.
D.Kind-hearted Shop Owner.

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